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My life
may never stand again
Over its own shoulders
As it has been ladden with
Pain and grief with dismise.
Hope my ruins attract audiences
With a view to see the main culprit
My future may not be there with me
And my next level might never be known
Just remember how much I cared for
You made up the mind of not making
Just depressed how my life may stand again.
may never stand again
Over its own shoulders
As it has been ladden with
Pain and grief with dismise.
Hope my ruins attract audiences
With a view to see the main culprit
My future may not be there with me
And my next level might never be known
Just remember how much I cared for
You made up the mind of not making
Just depressed how my life may stand again.
Published 5th May 2015
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5th May 2015 8:34pm
5th May 2015 9:44pm
As long as your life remains on its feet you'll be fine. I think you've found some audience here. I just hope the feedback's enough.
10th May 2015 6:01pm
I always love the theme in your poetry.
They are inspirational and thought provoking.
They are inspirational and thought provoking.
