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Silent Voices
close my eyes to see my future
my sprit transports from my flesh
while my body lay still upon satin sheets
see my life under another sun
one that shines dimmer as days go by
where luving voices are silent
cold shivers run thru my soul
try to waken but remain in slumber
as dreams reveal my destiny
walking thru a beautiful forest
tree tops kissing clouds above
sun streaking thru them radiantly
faceless mysterious soul of emptiness
walks beside me staring thru my soul
whispered voice unknown eerily chanting
forest turned cold with disenchantment
trees began to shrink into darkness
voice silenced with only my footsteps I hear
finally awaken on a soggy pillow of reality
realizing friendships that won't always be
seeing that you're already silencing your presence
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl
All rights Reserved.
my sprit transports from my flesh
while my body lay still upon satin sheets
see my life under another sun
one that shines dimmer as days go by
where luving voices are silent
cold shivers run thru my soul
try to waken but remain in slumber
as dreams reveal my destiny
walking thru a beautiful forest
tree tops kissing clouds above
sun streaking thru them radiantly
faceless mysterious soul of emptiness
walks beside me staring thru my soul
whispered voice unknown eerily chanting
forest turned cold with disenchantment
trees began to shrink into darkness
voice silenced with only my footsteps I hear
finally awaken on a soggy pillow of reality
realizing friendships that won't always be
seeing that you're already silencing your presence
Copyright © 2015 Flowergirl
All rights Reserved.
Published 2nd May 2015
| Edited 1st Jun 2015
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2nd May 2015 2:33am
2nd May 2015 2:40am
Faith my sweet friend......thank you for taking time to inside me......I've had many thoughts on friendships the last few weeks.....a few days this came flowing out.....I'm so glad you like.....xo :)
Anonymous
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2nd May 2015 2:46am
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2nd May 2015 3:07am
Sacred Friend.......you always are and have been to me and in my life....never a doubt......thank you.....xo :)
Anonymous
2nd May 2015 3:59am
"finally awaken on a soggy pillow of reality
realizing friendships that won't always be
seeing that you're already silencing your presence"
So sad but yet still filled with your beauty.
realizing friendships that won't always be
seeing that you're already silencing your presence"
So sad but yet still filled with your beauty.
2nd May 2015 4:13am
Thank you SG......friendship is sacred to me.....when it is silenced for no reason of why.....they just walk out of your heart.....it bothers me greatly......xo :)
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2nd May 2015 5:13am
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3rd May 2015 2:32pm
Yes Sweet S......friendship is sacred......but to some it seems worthless......I have learned to just walk the other way......no matter the pain......thank you for leaning......luv and hugs xo :)
2nd May 2015 7:16pm
I really hate to see you in such a sad mood Flower. This combined with your other new submission. But it's lovely. I was thinking it could be astral projection at the start, but as it went along it just seemed like a dream. I wish I could have more like yours.
Crow you always have such a temder soul.......feel so much into what a person writes......thank you for a glimpse in......I believe dreams to be reflections of what our hearts feel......I have found many of them to be true......by the way.....I'm ok....luv and hugs my friend......xo :)
Anonymous
3rd May 2015 4:37am
Well, Miss Flower, I don't know if I should smile or cry? There is so much going on in this piece that it's hard to decipher what is real and unreal? Sure it is but a dream, but when a dream begins to interfere with reality then it becomes more of a premonition. Beautiful, just beautiful. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
Sweet Dev......I believe as always you feel what is not written......you've always had that ability to see within a soul.....thank you for sharing your thoughts and precious words with me......luv and smiles your way xoxo :)
4th May 2015 2:17am
the songs pop in my head yet again. The start of the poem brings Stevie Wonder's "Cold Chill" to mind but then the rest makes me think of the elegance of Enya's finest tunes.
6th May 2015 2:06am
Hi Jazz.....am very honored by the comparison to those brilliant songs......great to see you again....thank you for sharing your thoughts with me.....xo :)
5th May 2015 5:10am
Pain, loss and remorse pour masterfully from your purple pen, ES.
Silence is never golden.
Be still. Listen. Sense the luv sent you upon a gentle breeze.
xo
EV
Silence is never golden.
Be still. Listen. Sense the luv sent you upon a gentle breeze.
xo
EV
Sweet EV......
closing my eyes laying upon velvet petals
feeling your luv being brought to me
by a gentle breeze blown from a kiss
in darkness of my soul you are there
your warmness swirling within me
hugging my flesh in the midst of silence
Thank you EV for sending your luv and thoughtful words and graceful friendship......xo :)
closing my eyes laying upon velvet petals
feeling your luv being brought to me
by a gentle breeze blown from a kiss
in darkness of my soul you are there
your warmness swirling within me
hugging my flesh in the midst of silence
Thank you EV for sending your luv and thoughtful words and graceful friendship......xo :)
Anonymous
4th Aug 2015 4:10am
What we dream or wish would come to pass often times never does. You captured this perfectly.
4th Aug 2015 5:00am
You're so right Scooter.....you got the message here perfectly......thank you for another smile upon my page.....xo :)
