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Black Box
Somehow this airliner vanished
Only the black box recovered
Bobbing in the Bermuda Triangle
A garbled voice indicating pilot terror
The crew confused and fading
And the passengers unaccounted for
Search teams being assembled
But the Triangle's geometry daunting
Only a few heroic enough to make the effort
So the flight's fate yet to be determined...
Only the black box recovered
Bobbing in the Bermuda Triangle
A garbled voice indicating pilot terror
The crew confused and fading
And the passengers unaccounted for
Search teams being assembled
But the Triangle's geometry daunting
Only a few heroic enough to make the effort
So the flight's fate yet to be determined...
Published 1st May 2015
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Anonymous
1st May 2015 5:45pm
ah this is by far one of my favourite mysteries... any theories crowfly[?]
1st May 2015 6:09pm
I wish I had some. Sea monsters seem a bit farfetched. The fear of the unknown is probably the most powerful fear of all. Thanks for reading and exploring Earth Child.
1st May 2015 7:08pm
2nd May 2015 1:21am
1st May 2015 10:21pm
"Bobbing in the Bermuda Triangle
A garbled voice indicating pilot terror"
Very nice use of language. Love how these lines flow.
A garbled voice indicating pilot terror"
Very nice use of language. Love how these lines flow.
2nd May 2015 1:18am
3rd May 2015 11:04am
Holy shit, that's 3 perspectives shifted
A garbled voice indicating pilot terror
The crew confused and fading
And the passengers unaccounted for
For escalating fear. That makes for a heavy mystery. This was awesome crowfly!
A garbled voice indicating pilot terror
The crew confused and fading
And the passengers unaccounted for
For escalating fear. That makes for a heavy mystery. This was awesome crowfly!
3rd May 2015 5:50pm
3rd May 2015 7:13pm
wow how horrible ! great details I'm glad I wasn't on that plane!!
Write on Crow!!!
loves you
Zazzles xoxoxo
Write on Crow!!!
loves you
Zazzles xoxoxo
3rd May 2015 7:27pm
Scary huh? Just finding the box alone is almost more frightening than knowing exactly what happened.
