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And as I rode faster
galloping without distance covered
I remembered it all
like I'd been plugged in
an upload of flashbacks
bright lights
till there you where
staring up at me
Just as I imagined it to be.
galloping without distance covered
I remembered it all
like I'd been plugged in
an upload of flashbacks
bright lights
till there you where
staring up at me
Just as I imagined it to be.
Published 25th Apr 2015
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Maybe it's just my naughty old mind, but I read this as a very sexually driven poem, well masked in metaphors. If I'm wrong, forgive my dirty mind... If I'm right, BRAVO! :) Laying on his back, what else can he do but upload as you ride...? jj
25th Apr 2015 7:00pm
Bravo! Dear friend :)
Yes I'm naughty hehe
it's amazing what memories come flooding back
when the bright lights of its arrival takes me away dreaming
Yes I'm naughty hehe
it's amazing what memories come flooding back
when the bright lights of its arrival takes me away dreaming
25th Apr 2015 11:47pm
26th Apr 2015 5:13am
