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A good friend says ...
My poems are bracing and tender
I like that
I let her laugh and maybe cry a little
We were friends and then lovers briefly
Friendship works better
Years in the making
Enduring and satisfying
I like that
I let her laugh and maybe cry a little
We were friends and then lovers briefly
Friendship works better
Years in the making
Enduring and satisfying
Published 25th Apr 2015
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25th Apr 2015 1:33pm
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25th Apr 2015 1:39pm
Yes, 418 ....
It was a great moment when we discovered we could still be friends, good friends like before.
Thx S
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It was a great moment when we discovered we could still be friends, good friends like before.
Thx S
x
26th Apr 2015 2:48pm
good friends should never fuck - fucking fucks up good friendships
just my humble opinion :-)
great read as always :-)
just my humble opinion :-)
great read as always :-)
26th Apr 2015 3:05pm
I totally agree. We had been flirting for years and one night at a rented beach house when we were both blasted on to much vodka we did the deed. Next morning was hangover city and what the fuck did we do that for ....
26th Apr 2015 10:23pm
Hmmm...so what happens to the flame between to friends after the deed is done? Ignored? Aftermath...
This was a great read.
This was a great read.
27th Apr 2015 00:33am
Anonymous
27th Apr 2015 1:04am
your poems are bracing and tender! and i agree. it's hard to be lovers with a friend. sometimes, it works out fine. most often...nope.
well done, cowboy!
well done, cowboy!
27th Apr 2015 1:19am
29th Apr 2015 6:17am
29th Apr 2015 10:05am
It is great but often difficult. People often don't want to do the personal work. I got lucky in this case ...
