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Beautifully Taken
My frame
screen of thought
desire
wants
to be seen
a change of picture
to swell the heart
feeding the soul
getting on the case
you'll need to be
screen of thought
desire
wants
to be seen
a change of picture
to swell the heart
feeding the soul
getting on the case
you'll need to be
Published 23rd Apr 2015
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23rd Apr 2015 8:51pm
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24th Apr 2015 00:53am
24th Apr 2015 5:37am
24th Apr 2015 2:20am
I love delving into the layers of your work Rose, even when I'm god awful wrong lol ...
I'm reading this as you want to be seen in a new light but still want the assurance of his support when others take in the "new" you
I'm reading this as you want to be seen in a new light but still want the assurance of his support when others take in the "new" you
24th Apr 2015 5:41am
That's a good thought LSP xD
but it wasn't so complex as what you described :)
Though again i do love your take on it
but it wasn't so complex as what you described :)
Though again i do love your take on it
