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You Know the Moment I Mean
You know the one.
She’s on her back.
Naked.
Legs spread.
You’re naked,
Kneeling between them.
Leaning forward.
You take her hands,
One,
In each of yours.
Raise them,
Above her head.
Hold them there.
Bend forward.
Kiss her gently,
But,
Forcefully.
Raise your lips,
From hers.
Look directly into,
Her eyes.
Smile?
Grin?
Maybe a little of each.
And,
Then,
Slide,
Slowly,
Gently,
Completely,
Deeply,
Inside,
Her.
That,
Moment.
That,
One.
She’s on her back.
Naked.
Legs spread.
You’re naked,
Kneeling between them.
Leaning forward.
You take her hands,
One,
In each of yours.
Raise them,
Above her head.
Hold them there.
Bend forward.
Kiss her gently,
But,
Forcefully.
Raise your lips,
From hers.
Look directly into,
Her eyes.
Smile?
Grin?
Maybe a little of each.
And,
Then,
Slide,
Slowly,
Gently,
Completely,
Deeply,
Inside,
Her.
That,
Moment.
That,
One.
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Re: You Know the Moment I Mean
re: Re: You Know the Moment I Mean
22nd Apr 2015 3:45pm
Re: You Know the Moment I Mean
22nd Apr 2015 6:11pm
The moment that stops time. The best. Perfectly written. Thanks for that.
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re: Re: You Know the Moment I Mean
22nd Apr 2015 6:48pm
Stops time.
I like that.
If I'd thought of that image, I would have tried to work it in to this.
Jay
I like that.
If I'd thought of that image, I would have tried to work it in to this.
Jay
Re: You Know the Moment I Mean
re: Re: You Know the Moment I Mean
23rd Apr 2015 4:30pm
Thank you!
I appreciate the time you spent reading my work. And, even more so, the time you spent writing a comment.
Jay
I appreciate the time you spent reading my work. And, even more so, the time you spent writing a comment.
Jay
Re: You Know the Moment I Mean
26th Apr 2015 3:22am
you make me want to be a boy for a day...cold shower seems to be on the menu for me..great write..curtsy bow
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re: Re: You Know the Moment I Mean
27th Apr 2015 4:51pm
Stay a girl.
Enjoy what the right boy can do for you and what you can do for that boy.
Jay
Enjoy what the right boy can do for you and what you can do for that boy.
Jay
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