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OBSERVATIONAL - THE BREASTS IN EROTIC VERSE
(Originally entered in Write a Poem involving the Breasts challenge.)
How many celebrate the breasts
As key lovemaking interests,
Where the man creates sensation
In build up to copulation
(Designed to make, in marriage bed,
The babies, who'd be by them fed).
Since bottled milk and the birth pill
They've become more 'bout THRILL than FILL,
Of how they look and how they feel,
The part they play in sex appeal.
How many celebrate the breasts
As key lovemaking interests,
Where the man creates sensation
In build up to copulation
(Designed to make, in marriage bed,
The babies, who'd be by them fed).
Since bottled milk and the birth pill
They've become more 'bout THRILL than FILL,
Of how they look and how they feel,
The part they play in sex appeal.
Published 21st Apr 2015
| Edited 22nd Apr 2015
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22nd Apr 2015 3:17am
the breasts are a beautiful part of a woman's body i think some men forget....
enjoyed the read Solomon... :)
enjoyed the read Solomon... :)
22nd Apr 2015 6:21am
Thank you. This man agrees and does not forget. I have just added a few lines.
