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it's too late now...
the thing is, when
you're out and it's dark, you can't put
the light on...
she said I told you
to do it before we left
the house...
you're out and it's dark, you can't put
the light on...
she said I told you
to do it before we left
the house...
Published 16th Apr 2015
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16th Apr 2015 4:08am
Piss and phosphorus. :) Its times like this I thank my lucky stars for the firefly. Your writing always leaves me smiling and inspired.
17th Apr 2015 00:40am
I'm afraid this is a failed piece...
in the second stanza, her implication
was that he should have lit up her
world before taking her out in
it, but couched of course in the
language of a more fundamental
human need..:)
the only reason I don't delete it is
that we all need sombody whispering
in our ear that we're crap..!
in the second stanza, her implication
was that he should have lit up her
world before taking her out in
it, but couched of course in the
language of a more fundamental
human need..:)
the only reason I don't delete it is
that we all need sombody whispering
in our ear that we're crap..!
Anonymous
16th Apr 2015 1:34pm
Giggle, the lady is always right :P
17th Apr 2015 00:42am
17th Apr 2015 10:00am
This comes across as lost in translation to me. She didn't quite comprehend maybe.
I do enjoy these ditty's of your's Paul. Many are quite potent. :)
I do enjoy these ditty's of your's Paul. Many are quite potent. :)
17th Apr 2015 7:25pm
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