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friendly fire
i couldn't tell from where i took the shot
if it was still twitching or if it was dead
i got in close to make sure of the kill
put three more shots into the heart
and drained the clip into the back of it's head..
now love's dead
if it was still twitching or if it was dead
i got in close to make sure of the kill
put three more shots into the heart
and drained the clip into the back of it's head..
now love's dead
Published 13th Apr 2015
| Edited 16th Apr 2015
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13th Apr 2015 4:32pm
Dagg bro. THAT didn't sound too 'friendly'
to me! lol... Outstanding ink though :)
to me! lol... Outstanding ink though :)
16th Apr 2015 12:52pm
Thanks brother. Didn't feel too friendly either. Lol. Always a pleasure my friend.
13th Apr 2015 5:42pm
Chills, my friend!!
With your analogy, you have vividly expressed the depths of anger that often accompanies the loss of love...(especially through betrayal)
Inked with Intensity--Indeed!
With your analogy, you have vividly expressed the depths of anger that often accompanies the loss of love...(especially through betrayal)
Inked with Intensity--Indeed!
16th Apr 2015 12:56pm
Me and love do just fine as long as we stay clear of each other Enchantress. I can see what it's doing better from here. With good reason. Thank you as always dear Lady. xo
14th Apr 2015 00:55am
16th Apr 2015 12:59pm
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- Edited 18th Apr 2015 3:35am
14th Apr 2015 4:28am
Welcome back my friend.....this is a very thought provoking write.....very visual that's for sure......wow!! xo :)
16th Apr 2015 1:01pm
Hey there Flower. Less is more with some topics i think. Always a pleasure lovely. Thank you. xo
7th Jul 2016 9:21am
Love is zombie, it consumes living flesh ... It can't be killed.
Nice try though.
Nice try though.
6th Sep 2016 2:55am
I believe you're right LSP. But I will stay the course. I think it's for the best. Thank you again brother. Always appreciated.
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