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Black Velvet Sky
The sky is crying y'all
Hasn't shed a tear this way in so long
She hasn't been near, and I'm trying to be strong
Why have you cum to visit me today?
Resurrecting memories
of sweet kisses
making my body tingle, it never misses
a possession of my mind, body and soul
I can not control this feeling
she makes me tremble...
…...before I let go
Beautiful
Soft
Brown Body
Baby soft raven hair
Moist lips
nipples erect
shining like jewels
and she is so wet.....down there
….Gulf stream showers
Mahogany_Wood floating
down her silky, cream dreamin' for hours
Sweet Louisiana sunshine
lust beaming past
her smallish waist accentuating that
beautiful ass,
flowing legs and buoyant thighs
….memories of “when you were mine”
“all I think about is making love”
caught up in the sounds of your wet release
the way your love cum down
all over me.....
…..like water
that black velvet sky
shedding a million tears today
laying here on the left side of the bed
I feel her seduction
in an old familiar way.....
yet
she hasn't been near,
I'm trying to be strong
Why have you cum to visit me today?
Published 9th Apr 2015
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9th Apr 2015 1:53pm
Wow. Sexy bum.:)
“all I think about is making love” funny familiar almost forgotten feeling. Good read MrM.
“all I think about is making love” funny familiar almost forgotten feeling. Good read MrM.
9th Apr 2015 4:58pm
Thank you pretty lady. "There's a little black spot on the sun today....." from "The King Of Pain"
9th Apr 2015 3:45pm
They say anticipation whets the appetite. I would say yours is sufficiently whetted! Nice read.
9th Apr 2015 5:01pm
Thank you Zoe but.....
.....tis just a thick memory of something, someone who was (and perhaps still is to a degree) rooted inside of me alas:
"She gone, oh I, oh I
I've got to learn how to face it...she's gone" (Hall and Oates)
.....tis just a thick memory of something, someone who was (and perhaps still is to a degree) rooted inside of me alas:
"She gone, oh I, oh I
I've got to learn how to face it...she's gone" (Hall and Oates)
9th Apr 2015 3:45pm
9th Apr 2015 5:03pm
Thank You White Gurl : )
"...ain't no sunshine when she's gone" Bill Withers Haunting memories linger.
"...ain't no sunshine when she's gone" Bill Withers Haunting memories linger.
9th Apr 2015 3:50pm
Seeing the title my first reaction was "oh this is a play on a Stevie
Ray Vaughan tune. I did catch the Prince reference. However by the time the write ends, the feeling of absence seems so intense that this has to be a corollary to Wither's "Ain't No Sunshine". As usual I thank you for taking me down musical memory lane, even if that wasn't the goal!
Ray Vaughan tune. I did catch the Prince reference. However by the time the write ends, the feeling of absence seems so intense that this has to be a corollary to Wither's "Ain't No Sunshine". As usual I thank you for taking me down musical memory lane, even if that wasn't the goal!
9th Apr 2015 5:04pm
Jazz, as always our musical interaction and appreciation is always our best creative connection : )
Anonymous
9th Apr 2015 10:22pm
MrM,
At that crossroad down in Louisiana, standing in the sunshine of her love? Beautiful, haunting recall. And, if I could, I'd be walking to New Orleans ;-)
tornado
At that crossroad down in Louisiana, standing in the sunshine of her love? Beautiful, haunting recall. And, if I could, I'd be walking to New Orleans ;-)
tornado
15th Apr 2015 12:51pm
Damn, even your solo work feels like collaboration... some smoky spirit. You're tapped into something powerful, MrM!
