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yeah
Yeah
just there
yeah
you got it
yeah
spot on
yeah
no one will see
yeah
your getting good
yeah
perfect blow
yeah
oh you da man now
yeah yeah..
that you are..
just there
yeah
you got it
yeah
spot on
yeah
no one will see
yeah
your getting good
yeah
perfect blow
yeah
oh you da man now
yeah yeah..
that you are..
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6th Apr 2015 10:01am
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6th Apr 2015 1:08pm
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6th Apr 2015 3:46pm
Bit aggressive but most aggressors are subtle in their knowing where to hit without leaving marks
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6th Apr 2015 8:51pm
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re: Re: yeah
6th Apr 2015 9:01pm
Was a sarcastic point if view approach to domestic abuse
Thankyou gabriel it does i agree appear otherwise
Thankyou gabriel it does i agree appear otherwise
Re: yeah
6th Apr 2015 9:15pm
I guess I let reputation dictate judgement on this Rose bc like Gabriel I first thought erotica but you clearly labeled it anger ... Thank you for the clarification, although the line "perfect blow" is quite telling.
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7th Apr 2015 5:09am