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He Makes No Mistakes
walking most of my life in darkness
to what luving another soul was like
how can my heart have been so blind
perhaps that was His purpose for us
to know how it's supposed to be
He brought our two souls together
to learn from one another
to heal loneliness within ourselves
to luv each other as none before us have
He makes no mistakes my Luv
blindfolded me from cruelty of others
when it was removed.....there you were
to what luving another soul was like
how can my heart have been so blind
perhaps that was His purpose for us
to know how it's supposed to be
He brought our two souls together
to learn from one another
to heal loneliness within ourselves
to luv each other as none before us have
He makes no mistakes my Luv
blindfolded me from cruelty of others
when it was removed.....there you were
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re: Re: He Makes No Mistakes
5th Apr 2015 1:17am
Sweet S......you're slways so sweet and encouraging......thank you for always sending a sweet smile upon my page......luv back to ya...xo :)
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Anonymous
4th Apr 2015 4:36pm
I love the whole premise of this. Nice
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re: Re: He Makes No Mistakes
5th Apr 2015 1:23am
Hi Slogasm......I'm glad you like this piece......it's very special to me.....thank you for your always kind words.....xo :)
Re: He Makes No Mistakes
4th Apr 2015 5:11pm
I could use a blindfold myself. I'll have to ask Him later. See who's there when it's taken off. Maybe an angel.
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re: Re: He Makes No Mistakes
5th Apr 2015 1:28am
Oh Crow.....what a visual your words leave me with......I think we all wish for an Angel......many are among us.....we just open our hearts to feel them......thank you for your thought provoking words you leave me.....luv and hugs your way.....xo :)
Re: He Makes No Mistakes
5th Apr 2015 5:11pm
I actually liked this filled with metaphors...
nice Fg, keep em coming")
Zazzles xo
nice Fg, keep em coming")
Zazzles xo
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re: Re: He Makes No Mistakes
8th Apr 2015 2:24am
Awe Z.....you're words always make me smile......always a great feeling when you stop by.....glad you liked this one.....thank you xo :)
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