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Head Bangers Ball
https://youtube.com/watch?v=q5-qdAyDkPY
Big Machine Velvet Revolver
please listen while reading thank you
I succumb to my submissive needs
and let him skull fuck
his second favorite pussy.
his luster stick slides down my throat
like a silicone covered pill
It's a real thrill
to have my mouth filled.
his milk is fat free
packed with protein
and vitamin C
plenty for me.
he grabs my head and pumps it
in and out, he's into it
yup that's it, up an down
and around, touch down!
legs above my head now
he slides in and fucks with
my emotions
Like a Jehovah witness
he has me talking in tongues
then down I go for
more cock sucking fun
two hands behind my back
he licks my pussy from behind
leaving it dripping & throbbing
redefining sublime
on my knees begging
like a homeless bitch
please baby PLEASE!
fuck this !!
He pile drives me to the floor
leaving me wanting no more !
Big Machine Velvet Revolver
please listen while reading thank you
I succumb to my submissive needs
and let him skull fuck
his second favorite pussy.
his luster stick slides down my throat
like a silicone covered pill
It's a real thrill
to have my mouth filled.
his milk is fat free
packed with protein
and vitamin C
plenty for me.
he grabs my head and pumps it
in and out, he's into it
yup that's it, up an down
and around, touch down!
legs above my head now
he slides in and fucks with
my emotions
Like a Jehovah witness
he has me talking in tongues
then down I go for
more cock sucking fun
two hands behind my back
he licks my pussy from behind
leaving it dripping & throbbing
redefining sublime
on my knees begging
like a homeless bitch
please baby PLEASE!
fuck this !!
He pile drives me to the floor
leaving me wanting no more !
Written by
Zazzles
(Broomie)
Published 3rd Apr 2015
| Edited 7th May 2024
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Anonymous
- Edited 25th Sep 2020 3:45am
3rd Apr 2015 6:51am
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re: Re: Head Bangers Ball
hahah I heard Big Machine and out fell this !!!
Loves you Wifey!!!!
((((((((((((((( willow)))))))))))))))))
Love
Zazzles xoxoxox
Loves you Wifey!!!!
((((((((((((((( willow)))))))))))))))))
Love
Zazzles xoxoxox
Re: Head Bangers Ball
Anonymous
3rd Apr 2015 7:59am
I love the title..lol
"his milk is fat free
packed with protein
and vitamin C
plenty for me..."
Very tastefully done...no pun intended;)
"his milk is fat free
packed with protein
and vitamin C
plenty for me..."
Very tastefully done...no pun intended;)
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3rd Apr 2015 8:03am
Hahahaha! It was so much fun writing this!
Glad to see you enjoyed this...
Thank you for the nod Slowgasm
Zazzles ")
Glad to see you enjoyed this...
Thank you for the nod Slowgasm
Zazzles ")
Re: Head Bangers Ball
3rd Apr 2015 4:46pm
Wow, Jackie, you give new meaning to the terms "head bangers" and "skull fuck." Your ball is hilarious! It contains plenty of nutrients for your consumption, protein and various vitamins. And then he goes in for a slide to your home pussy. And then he acquires a taste for the same. And then he brings you to your knees. And then, yes!, brings you to a conclusion with the jackhammer technique. James sounds like an accomplished lover. Exactly what you deserve, baby!
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re: Re: Head Bangers Ball
3rd Apr 2015 5:00pm
Hahahaha! I had such a good time writing this!
And it just fell outta my head and onto the screen!
Thank you for reading this I hope it put a smile on your face!!!
Loves you Honey*
Always
Zazzles xoxoxoxox
And it just fell outta my head and onto the screen!
Thank you for reading this I hope it put a smile on your face!!!
Loves you Honey*
Always
Zazzles xoxoxoxox
Re: Head Bangers Ball
3rd Apr 2015 7:19pm
'On my knees begging like a homeless bitch
sweet baby James PLEASE! fuck this!!
He pile drives me to the floor
leaving me wanting no more! '
wow :0 this was awesome aha and made me laugh xD your work is always great , hope you have a great day ;) aha xxx
sweet baby James PLEASE! fuck this!!
He pile drives me to the floor
leaving me wanting no more! '
wow :0 this was awesome aha and made me laugh xD your work is always great , hope you have a great day ;) aha xxx
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4th Apr 2015 2:00am
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4th Apr 2015 5:56am
hahahaha, That's the point...
loves your humor Johnny!!
love
Zazzles xoxoxoxoxxo
loves your humor Johnny!!
love
Zazzles xoxoxoxoxxo
Re: Head Bangers Ball
Anonymous
5th Apr 2015 3:29am
Hot write, Ms. Z. really dig this one.. nothing wrong with some, Velvet Revolver.. into my list it goes.. love your style..
Dave
Dave
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Hahaha Yeah! I love Velvet Revolver and while I was jammin to this I just got in the mood to write somethingsexy but nothing to over the top...
Im happy you enjoyed this...
Always
Jackie Hugs to you and Daisy, we miss her...
Zazzles Xxxx
Im happy you enjoyed this...
Always
Jackie Hugs to you and Daisy, we miss her...
Zazzles Xxxx
Re: Head Bangers Ball
6th Apr 2015 3:59pm
Would have liked to have seen something in the text of your poem that ties in more closely with the (quite on-turning) picture, about how it felt to have his hands where they are shown (in the poem they are on her backside).
Thought of rhyming caption for the pic:
My Beloved stands back of me
Hands shielding my modesty
While my arms twist opposite ways
At the sensations that they raise.
Thought of rhyming caption for the pic:
My Beloved stands back of me
Hands shielding my modesty
While my arms twist opposite ways
At the sensations that they raise.
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re: Re: Head Bangers Ball
6th Apr 2015 7:53pm
Um. No... I wrote that poem then picked the pic he is inked and so am I...
But thanks...
Zazzles
But thanks...
Zazzles
Re: Head Bangers Ball
8th Apr 2015 1:31am
"..begging like a homeless bitch"?
Damn girl.
I liked the undercurrent of humor
dressed in desire.
Skullfucked. (smh) I...I...nvm. lol
Damn girl.
I liked the undercurrent of humor
dressed in desire.
Skullfucked. (smh) I...I...nvm. lol
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8th Apr 2015 2:44am
I meant and mean every last word !
Thank you for the read Sandman! you are such a
a positive vibe on my page thanks!!
Loves you 9 days and counting!!!
Zazzles xoxoxoxoxox
Thank you for the read Sandman! you are such a
a positive vibe on my page thanks!!
Loves you 9 days and counting!!!
Zazzles xoxoxoxoxox
Re: Head Bangers Ball
6th May 2015 7:57am
Usually not my cup of tea but otherwise amazing flow and intense emotions only add fuel to the fire with some added spice listening to the song
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6th May 2015 7:28pm
Re. Head Bangers Ball
30th Jan 2016 4:44am
damn Z..this is intense...
raw passionate and witty. ..
and fucks with my emotions
like a Jehovah's Witness
heh heh. ..yeah. ...
i like that...
get under the skin
before going under the skirt...
..
hot and steamy ..
got the mental flowin..
raw passionate and witty. ..
and fucks with my emotions
like a Jehovah's Witness
heh heh. ..yeah. ...
i like that...
get under the skin
before going under the skirt...
..
hot and steamy ..
got the mental flowin..
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Re. Head Bangers Ball
8th Mar 2016 3:53am
then the bell goes off [ ding ] end of round one....better have some water cause this could go the distance...:)
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12th Mar 2016 7:23pm
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
14th Jul 2018 7:03pm
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14th Jul 2018 8:47pm
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Nov 2018 00:49am
4th Oct 2018 6:42pm
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5th Oct 2018 10:39pm
Lmao ya think? Yes when I’m in the mood, I enjoy a good mouth fucking now and again... however,
I must really really have to want you, I can’t swing with a man who asks permission,,, 🤐😑
Jackie 🦋🍁
I must really really have to want you, I can’t swing with a man who asks permission,,, 🤐😑
Jackie 🦋🍁
Re. Head Bangers Ball
DAAAAYUM!!
Jackie... she says she doesn't write erotica..
Wow, MY EYES!!!.... YESSSS
This piece was metal /m\
🤘🏻🤘🏻🤘🏻🤘🏻🤘🏻🤘🏻
(Don't get me started on my love for Slash....)
Omg, the stories..
I love you, lady!!!
💋 💜 💋
xoxo
https://youtu.be/Vyn7tHP-hm0
*Your link for Velvet Revolver tune isn't working...
the one above does!!
☑
I loved VR, too!
Very very much
🌹
Jackie... she says she doesn't write erotica..
Wow, MY EYES!!!.... YESSSS
This piece was metal /m\
🤘🏻🤘🏻🤘🏻🤘🏻🤘🏻🤘🏻
(Don't get me started on my love for Slash....)
Omg, the stories..
I love you, lady!!!
💋 💜 💋
xoxo
https://youtu.be/Vyn7tHP-hm0
*Your link for Velvet Revolver tune isn't working...
the one above does!!
☑
I loved VR, too!
Very very much
🌹
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Thanks I just fixed the link
And lmfao! Giggles* yeah well I have my moods :)
If you think this is something go check out I know his secret! 🤣
Loves you always sis 🤗❤️
Jackie xoxox
By the way this was intended for a virtual crush I had 🤣 with a guy named James pffff!
I edit his punk- ass out thou !
And lmfao! Giggles* yeah well I have my moods :)
If you think this is something go check out I know his secret! 🤣
Loves you always sis 🤗❤️
Jackie xoxox
By the way this was intended for a virtual crush I had 🤣 with a guy named James pffff!
I edit his punk- ass out thou !
Anonymous
- Edited 9th May 2021 8:45pm
6th Apr 2021 5:19am
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Re: Re. Head Bangers Ball
Lol yeah that happens when your drinking brandy and your thoughts go
( deep) pun intended 😂
Nice to meet you Gyco
Jackie 🤗
( deep) pun intended 😂
Nice to meet you Gyco
Jackie 🤗
Re. Head Bangers Ball
7th May 2024 5:09am
So, the experienced dom writes erotica after all...
Heated and Determined. Yeah, you need to get into the mood more often. I love this. Very solid.
I can't find the other one you mentioned in you list, though.
Meg
xoxo
Heated and Determined. Yeah, you need to get into the mood more often. I love this. Very solid.
I can't find the other one you mentioned in you list, though.
Meg
xoxo
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7th May 2024 5:19am
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7th May 2024 5:26am