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He Said
All she remembered...
were his words...
"I love you baby" He said
As his hands began there...
Familiar dance upon her skin
"Your Hair, is so beautiful"
He cooed... while cupping her
supple breast in one hand
Dazed and only focused on His Words
She just wanted that connection
The Words he spoke were like a
Jailors Keys... Jingling Hope filled
Verbs and action words at her Heart
Even if His Actions...didn't play the part
She was oblivious to his anticipation
as sheer abandon overcame Him...
Submerging Himself inside her...
Like a Demon...Possessing a Soul
Each Thrust...More needy than the next
Exposing... Much more ...than Her Flesh
She allowed... His Words to take root
to take hold
Even though no one knew
of His Late night visits
He said... She was everything to him
Even though he would give her sex
before he would give her food or water
Never daunted His image in her mind
He said... He Loved Her
and here I am...the next door neighbor
wistfully watching
from the shadows of my own soul
She is always telling about what
This Bastard Said to Her
I wonder...does She ever wonder
what ... He Says to His WIFE
when he leaves Her...
Or is She... caught up in His Words too?
were his words...
"I love you baby" He said
As his hands began there...
Familiar dance upon her skin
"Your Hair, is so beautiful"
He cooed... while cupping her
supple breast in one hand
Dazed and only focused on His Words
She just wanted that connection
The Words he spoke were like a
Jailors Keys... Jingling Hope filled
Verbs and action words at her Heart
Even if His Actions...didn't play the part
She was oblivious to his anticipation
as sheer abandon overcame Him...
Submerging Himself inside her...
Like a Demon...Possessing a Soul
Each Thrust...More needy than the next
Exposing... Much more ...than Her Flesh
She allowed... His Words to take root
to take hold
Even though no one knew
of His Late night visits
He said... She was everything to him
Even though he would give her sex
before he would give her food or water
Never daunted His image in her mind
He said... He Loved Her
and here I am...the next door neighbor
wistfully watching
from the shadows of my own soul
She is always telling about what
This Bastard Said to Her
I wonder...does She ever wonder
what ... He Says to His WIFE
when he leaves Her...
Or is She... caught up in His Words too?
Published 2nd Apr 2015
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2nd Apr 2015 2:23pm
Wow.This poetry made my day.Lovely with a great sense of maturity in every line.
mcjay
mcjay
2nd Apr 2015 2:37pm
Mcjay thank you kindly for visiting my pages today...
Some things just make me say hhmm.... with people
this was and is a real life situation happening in my neighborhood.... I swear I wanna flatten this guys tires for my neighbors sake he is 44 SHE is 21 and too young to see how he is using her....ugh...and the saga continues
XOXO
Fire
Some things just make me say hhmm.... with people
this was and is a real life situation happening in my neighborhood.... I swear I wanna flatten this guys tires for my neighbors sake he is 44 SHE is 21 and too young to see how he is using her....ugh...and the saga continues
XOXO
Fire
2nd Apr 2015 3:16pm
This was written really well and is extremely depressing and angering... It's rather sickening that some humans can have such blatant disregard for others, taking advantage of their emotional states and acting so selfishly. I feel awful for both women. because it's only a matter of time before she learns the hard way that she's nothing but a pleasure object. Nothing good ever comes out of these situations in the end. And the poor wife, being deceived and betrayed, taken for granted. Ugh. What a despicable individual this man is. And sadly, there's far too many of these type of people around. This story is more common than it should be.
