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[Fiery] Fourth Bird of the Bleeding Dusk

 

the skein algorithm
was rather unfit for the 'four(th)' at flight

"This was a closed loop
a rhombohedric perpetuality
perhaps queen backed 'him' as he lead
and they swiftly interchanged positions
Perfect switch over,  the two in focus
He, the fourth from the first
and she, the fourth from the last
and viceversa happening
all across the migratory span
that staggeringly ranged
from each created~concentrated moment together
equating infinite multiples of their lifetime
to lightyears beyond life
towards centric soulpull
from the cosmic silkenblack magic"

until flapping silhouettes
disappeared over reddened horizon
that dyed a flaming sandwiched layer  
betwixt the fading skyblues taken in an intermittent shocked paleness
and its bottommost sturdy mountainous indigoes
bearing overlapped ghats of shadowy stillmemories
with their irremovably resolute twin minds at work
towards a dawn and more dawns
howsoever and whatsoever

that dusk bleeding his name
carried his strong musk currents
that were less than half-spelt
by exchanged words
her hands beautifully trembled from intensity
and fastness in the thrillling temporal needs
that tried merger of their distances
bayleaves in her hold  
were pestle-mortared traceless
in mashed-up scented exudates
like her pounding heart with softly expelled whispers
with peculiar fruitened spiciness, a mangoish-cinnamic clamour
hotness vapourized as coolant droplets of a relaxing condensed fruition
as they left then after an era-long hour

such pauses.    a curiousity earner
only earnestly worked towards restart

something shaped up for further shaping
for it had just started

her solid passionate reds in devoted motion
a perfect foil
to his flaring plasmic presence
often zooming in magnetic closeups
(that winked in firing orgasmic facade
 from his holistic glow of love)


a spatial flux
of mutual inspirations

unendingly uninterrupted








P.s: entered in "Feminine Archetypes" dup comp
summultima
Written by summultima (uma)
Published | Edited 31st Mar 2015
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