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Within this awkward silence
Within this awkward silence
I realised, you'd realised it
I could tell by the sudden disapearence
Of your goofy boyish smile
Now; in this new moment of neverending silence
You realise; I realise, you realised it
And in this realisation
Lies no place for either of us to hide
I realised, you'd realised it
I could tell by the sudden disapearence
Of your goofy boyish smile
Now; in this new moment of neverending silence
You realise; I realise, you realised it
And in this realisation
Lies no place for either of us to hide
Published 16th May 2011
| Edited 1st Jun 2011
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16th May 2011 6:47pm
I don't know why I like this one so much, but I really do. It's remarkably clever for such a simple piece. Not sure if the comma in the final line is necessary, but that's the only minor thing I can find.
1st Jun 2011 00:29am
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2011 12:43pm
There is so much truth in this...
Nice piece.
Nice piece.
