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Mistress Rose
Her manner's warm and charming
Says her name's Enigma Rose
But the warnings prove alarming
As she strikes her lewdest pose
I choose to take a stand
Deciding to hang tough
But then she takes my hand
Says that she plays rough
Says don't give her any lip
Or she'll make me bleed
Says she'd rather wield her whip
And watch me spill my seed
"Sounds okay to me"
I say trying to stay calm
She then ignores my every plea
Until I go off like a bomb.
Says her name's Enigma Rose
But the warnings prove alarming
As she strikes her lewdest pose
I choose to take a stand
Deciding to hang tough
But then she takes my hand
Says that she plays rough
Says don't give her any lip
Or she'll make me bleed
Says she'd rather wield her whip
And watch me spill my seed
"Sounds okay to me"
I say trying to stay calm
She then ignores my every plea
Until I go off like a bomb.
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Re: Mistress Rose
29th Mar 2015 5:00pm
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29th Mar 2015 5:12pm
Re: Mistress Rose
29th Mar 2015 5:10pm
LOL so good !
"Sounds okay to me" <<< wicked funny!!
I say trying to stay calm
She then ignores my every plea
Until I go off like a bomb.
I love it when your playful Crow :)
* Zazzles* gives crow a smoochy!!
Loves you my darling!!
zazzles xoxoxo
"Sounds okay to me" <<< wicked funny!!
I say trying to stay calm
She then ignores my every plea
Until I go off like a bomb.
I love it when your playful Crow :)
* Zazzles* gives crow a smoochy!!
Loves you my darling!!
zazzles xoxoxo
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29th Mar 2015 5:13pm
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29th Mar 2015 5:27pm
Come to Broom's Closet already Crow
we chat at night around the time your up "D Taryn goes, Sandman goes, I go , Diamond dave goes,
C'mon babes we wanna chat with you!!!
http://forums.delphiforums.com/jackieabreu/chat
we chat at night around the time your up "D Taryn goes, Sandman goes, I go , Diamond dave goes,
C'mon babes we wanna chat with you!!!
http://forums.delphiforums.com/jackieabreu/chat
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Re: Mistress Rose
29th Mar 2015 5:26pm
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29th Mar 2015 5:35pm
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29th Mar 2015 5:31pm
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29th Mar 2015 5:36pm
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29th Mar 2015 8:59pm
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29th Mar 2015 9:53pm
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29th Mar 2015 9:08pm
Re: Mistress Rose
30th Mar 2015 7:02pm
ooh... now that's sexy enough to make of feel a lil switchy ;)
great write crowfly
great write crowfly
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9th Apr 2015 5:43pm
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31st Mar 2015 8:40am
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9th Apr 2015 5:44pm
Re: Mistress Rose
Anonymous
31st Mar 2015 11:36am
Quite the mistress indeed...
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Re: Mistress Rose
31st Mar 2015 11:41am
Just keep adding layers to Enigma, until the history and profile grow. There's room for a serious following if done right as a graphic novel.
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Re: Mistress Rose
9th Apr 2015 4:57pm
Hey Crow.....what a cool write...got a bit of everything in it.....I like when you mix it up.....LOL!! Enjoyed...xo :)
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