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Take me along
Migratory birds
Take me along on your flight
Beyond horizon
I was awfully late with my answers to your nice comments this time ...
So sorry about it but there's so much work to be done in "real" life. More than I expected. Missed you terribly and will read you right NOW :-).
Take me along on your flight
Beyond horizon
I was awfully late with my answers to your nice comments this time ...
So sorry about it but there's so much work to be done in "real" life. More than I expected. Missed you terribly and will read you right NOW :-).
Written by
Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
Published 28th Mar 2015
| Edited 11th Apr 2015
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re: Re: Take me along
11th Apr 2015 5:11pm
Always glad to take you along on a journey, Gaby. Thank you for your nice comments!
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28th Mar 2015 10:23pm
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29th Mar 2015 00:03am
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11th Apr 2015 5:18pm
Yes, always a spectacle when they migrate.
Love the sounds the swans and geese make ...
Love the sounds the swans and geese make ...
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29th Mar 2015 00:34am
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29th Mar 2015 3:49am
how pretty! i can imagine it now, getting away from everything and flying with the birds.
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11th Apr 2015 5:23pm
I too think that it would be great to have the opportunity to get away that effortlessly, without albatross :-).
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Anonymous
29th Mar 2015 8:23am
Such a great image you have created,such longing...
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1st Apr 2015 9:27pm
YES!!!!
a sense of freedom, serenity in so few words...
I'll have a good today thanks to you....................
thank you
a sense of freedom, serenity in so few words...
I'll have a good today thanks to you....................
thank you
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re: Re: Take me along
11th Apr 2015 5:27pm
Sadsmiles, you made my day by stating that yours was good because of those three lines. That makes me HAPPY! Thank YOU!
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4th Jun 2015 2:16pm
I'm so happy to read this, whale. Sometimes I ask myself if those little ones maybe are getting boring but I do still like them, too :-). And I'm glad that you still seem to like them :-).
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