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I Never Will.
I don't love him.
I don't love him
Anymore.
I don't love him
Any more
Than I did.
I don't love him
Any more
Than I did
The last time.
I don't love him
Any more
Than I did
the last time
I loved somebody.
I don't love him
Anymore.
I don't love him
Any more
Than I did.
I don't love him
Any more
Than I did
The last time.
I don't love him
Any more
Than I did
the last time
I loved somebody.
Published 27th Mar 2015
| Edited 24th Oct 2015
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27th Mar 2015 7:41am
27th Mar 2015 8:29pm
Thanks. I wonder if it would work better if the order of the stanzas was reversed.
12th Apr 2015 5:08am
The progression works very well, Allison,especially as the layers reveal bit by bit. Nice work.
