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Lit
This fire won't leave,
Burning, turning me.
It's lit all day
Long.
In between dreaming
A cool tongue, douses,
Lending swollen love
Relief.
A cucumber cock
Of healing abilities.
Aloe hands that quickly
Quell.
I beg of you lover,
Take this flame down
To it's ember spirit
Knees.
Burning, turning me.
It's lit all day
Long.
In between dreaming
A cool tongue, douses,
Lending swollen love
Relief.
A cucumber cock
Of healing abilities.
Aloe hands that quickly
Quell.
I beg of you lover,
Take this flame down
To it's ember spirit
Knees.
Published 27th Mar 2015
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27th Mar 2015 6:09am
27th Mar 2015 2:50pm
27th Mar 2015 9:30am
Desire, passion, an honest plea for release in the arms of a lover. Very nice.
27th Mar 2015 2:52pm
27th Mar 2015 10:17am
A heat that can't be quenched, only banked. Lovely images. This one is a keeper!
27th Mar 2015 2:53pm
27th Mar 2015 11:12am
27th Mar 2015 2:53pm
28th Mar 2015 5:30pm
27th Mar 2015 2:48pm
27th Mar 2015 2:54pm
27th Mar 2015 2:59pm
Gotta get that fire under control one way or another. I'm glad to see the flames reduced to embers and not snuffed out completely. Where's Smokey the Bare when you need him? Prowling, growling, sniffing the air. Knowing fine work when he catches a whiff.
27th Mar 2015 3:01pm
27th Mar 2015 3:01pm
Anonymous
27th Mar 2015 3:42pm
I love the way you display yourself, can I make a salad with that cucumber when yo are done?
From an adoring fan!
From an adoring fan!
27th Mar 2015 3:52pm
28th Mar 2015 11:48pm
It's good to have the embers kindling all day long (and VERY sexy as well). The only real hurdle is the potential distraction it places in front of getting your daily efforts/tasks out of the way.
Although, from the description of this great succinct piece, you seem to have the solution readily at hand.
Solid poem Looloo
Although, from the description of this great succinct piece, you seem to have the solution readily at hand.
Solid poem Looloo
29th Mar 2015 3:11am
I couldn't put out the fire even if I wanted to. Something embedded.
Thank you for stopping by for a read Franco. I'm a huge fan of your work ;)
Thank you for stopping by for a read Franco. I'm a huge fan of your work ;)
31st Mar 2015 5:46am
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5th Apr 2015 5:16am
Here's to hoping I always carry this fire Mr. Feddeler. Your poems often stoke them ;)
