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22nd Mar 2015 1:35am
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22nd Mar 2015 2:41am
Unfortunately on the first day of spring the only silk that fell was ... Snow.
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Anonymous
22nd Mar 2015 4:18am
like this one too! :)
i think that under a cherry blossom would be...highly erotic. the smell alone is enough to drive one crazy!
i think that under a cherry blossom would be...highly erotic. the smell alone is enough to drive one crazy!
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22nd Mar 2015 9:24am
There are a number of them where I live ... At their peak it's like heaven.
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22nd Mar 2015 11:19am
I love poetry that links sex and nature. This is a very lovely haiku. Well done.
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23rd Mar 2015 3:43pm
We have nature because of sex ... a beauty to behold in all forms.
Thanks for the read and comment.
Thanks for the read and comment.
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22nd Mar 2015 6:18pm
Subtle, serene sensuality...
(For me, an image created of passion sated beneath a cherry tree)
Lovely lines...paired with a perfect picture...equals exceptional enjoyment, mo Chara!
(For me, an image created of passion sated beneath a cherry tree)
Lovely lines...paired with a perfect picture...equals exceptional enjoyment, mo Chara!
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23rd Mar 2015 3:51pm
I'm glad you picked up on the subtle tone of this ... I wanted to convey the lovers' bliss without overwhelming a reader ...
go raibh maith agat mo Chara
go raibh maith agat mo Chara
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23rd Mar 2015 5:45pm
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6th Jul 2015 5:27am
a perfect haiku here bro... this is absolutely hot! keep flowing that fire :D
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