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Grandiloquent
Dirk was too gregarious
against gravity
maintaing potential
Glut of contributions but a dearth.
Itinerant
When it prevails
The precursor of cold
Based on premise.
Larry was sacked
of the act of turpitude.
Unconscionable
My thoughts are transient
Rather moving
To be torpid sometimes
A sordid outpost of despair and crime
The jittery made by sporadic gunfire..... Unforgettable.
against gravity
maintaing potential
Glut of contributions but a dearth.
Itinerant
When it prevails
The precursor of cold
Based on premise.
Larry was sacked
of the act of turpitude.
Unconscionable
My thoughts are transient
Rather moving
To be torpid sometimes
A sordid outpost of despair and crime
The jittery made by sporadic gunfire..... Unforgettable.
Published 21st Mar 2015
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Anonymous
21st Mar 2015 8:27am
Beautiful ink!
21st Mar 2015 8:34am
21st Mar 2015 4:30pm
"The sound of gunfire off in the distance, I'm getting used to it now." So say the Talking Heads in "Life During Wartime." There's an echo of that in "A sordid outpost of crime and despair." I'm often inclined to cite work by other performers and artists, but "Grandiloquent" works beautifully on its own terms. You have quite a style and billion dollar vocabulary.
