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Anubis
that which is loved most lies next to me
skin at seven months that is nature's extravagance
and the words are finally winning
never ask the apples while they're tasting red
without their iron filings
line me explicitly at the ass end of this labor
that deserves rest
yet survives through the decoration of forgetfulness
skin at seven months that is nature's extravagance
and the words are finally winning
never ask the apples while they're tasting red
without their iron filings
line me explicitly at the ass end of this labor
that deserves rest
yet survives through the decoration of forgetfulness
Published 21st Mar 2015
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Anonymous
21st Mar 2015 11:43am
Nyce won meestirr baronne o lyte
23rd Mar 2015 1:20pm
21st Mar 2015 2:24pm
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22nd Mar 2015 3:23am
They're a wonder aren't they - give meaning to it all somehow
beautiful opening line - a joy throughout
beautiful opening line - a joy throughout
23rd Mar 2015 1:23pm
Indeed whale
Very glad enough of this stayed in to grab a reader
Was Afraid there might not be enough left to grapple at, very much appreciate your bit of validation
Very glad enough of this stayed in to grab a reader
Was Afraid there might not be enough left to grapple at, very much appreciate your bit of validation
3rd Apr 2015 12:51pm
I agree with the Whale, great opener. nice language, original in it's execution.
not sure I get the middle couplet but it sounds profound enough to repeat to people when I'm on a pulpit :)-
great stuff m'man
not sure I get the middle couplet but it sounds profound enough to repeat to people when I'm on a pulpit :)-
great stuff m'man
