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Blame it on my Shame
blame it on my name......
so you sacrifice my surrender to shame
never neglecting to nominate my name
beginning the brandishing of my blame
fearing the fiction finds fortune or fame
name shame, take the blame...
thinking in theory this will keep me tame
spinning stories that never stay the same
caught up in confusion with which it came
generating the gatecrashing of your game
blame it on your shame....
so you simply blame it on my name
faking your shame as part of the game
as fame returned from where it came
no truth is tame no sin starts the same
and the shame is still the same - whatever the name
so you sacrifice my surrender to shame
never neglecting to nominate my name
beginning the brandishing of my blame
fearing the fiction finds fortune or fame
name shame, take the blame...
thinking in theory this will keep me tame
spinning stories that never stay the same
caught up in confusion with which it came
generating the gatecrashing of your game
blame it on your shame....
so you simply blame it on my name
faking your shame as part of the game
as fame returned from where it came
no truth is tame no sin starts the same
and the shame is still the same - whatever the name
Published 20th Mar 2015
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20th Mar 2015 9:18pm
21st Mar 2015 6:08am
20th Mar 2015 11:08pm
21st Mar 2015 6:09am
It was simply a prompt of the word "shame". Curtsy bow twirl to you for that comment
20th Mar 2015 11:24pm
21st Mar 2015 6:11am
21st Mar 2015 2:51am
feeling the despair of the sinners here, soiled & tainted. call me anonymous...
21st Mar 2015 6:11am
5th Apr 2015 1:06pm
Look at you showing off that clever
rhythmic storytelling! Awesome flow
with a very strong message, hey I was prepared
to "blame it on the rain, that was falling falling..."
instead I'm gonna blame it on your 'verse game'
that had me calling calling this Outstanding! :)
lol
rhythmic storytelling! Awesome flow
with a very strong message, hey I was prepared
to "blame it on the rain, that was falling falling..."
instead I'm gonna blame it on your 'verse game'
that had me calling calling this Outstanding! :)
lol
5th Apr 2015 1:19pm
5th May 2015 4:51am
8th May 2015 5:08pm
thank you for stopping by like you do and taking the time to read my work..
Anonymous
8th Nov 2015 3:03am
the structure of this vibe is amazing!!!!...not to sound like a broken record but the context...so fluid..not a word wasted..and the depth of this hits like a sledgehammer..heavy vibe indeed!!!!..
8th Nov 2015 3:30am
