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Amiable

Our love is amoral
amorphous

We were cognizant of the sword swallowing
Souls coalesce
Sometimes coherent
Empirical experience or observation

Waiting to the bedside
River making delta
And forgotten
charms
and
we.......

Written by mcjay

Published 20th Mar 2015

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Re: Amiable

crowfly

20th Mar 2015 2:21pm

I like the way you refuse to assign morality or shape to love. It's probably too subjective for that. And really clever structure. Fine job McJay. Better than likable.