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What Goes With Red ...
Jelly beans in the morning
fruit flies at night,
egg shells in my coffee.
I got a crack in my head
and pea pods in my pocket
Fee-fi-fo-fum.
The Kool-Aid guy
just smashed through my wall
and he's picking at my brain,
what's two plus two he says
and what goes with red
i told him
"I got a crack in my head"
and he took a bite...
something's just not right.
fruit flies at night,
egg shells in my coffee.
I got a crack in my head
and pea pods in my pocket
Fee-fi-fo-fum.
The Kool-Aid guy
just smashed through my wall
and he's picking at my brain,
what's two plus two he says
and what goes with red
i told him
"I got a crack in my head"
and he took a bite...
something's just not right.
Published 19th Mar 2015
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20th Mar 2015 00:36am
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20th Mar 2015 1:18am
Just about everything. Did you see the one where the Kool-Aid Man busted through the bunker & bit the kid's head off? You, my friend, are livin' tha Good Life.
You really ought a gimme a swig a dat kewl-aide.......
You really ought a gimme a swig a dat kewl-aide.......
21st Mar 2015 10:31am
20th Mar 2015 2:38am
My friend,
This is quite a 'wicked' write...a definite freaky fantasy--to be certain!
However,I just couldn't help smiling--just a bit--at this one! I mean, i just kept picturing that Kool-Aid man breaking through your wall..:)
(....so, ummm...just what D I D you put in that Kool-Aid???? ;P )
(BTW, black goes quite nicely with red...as in licorice jellybeans, perhaps??)
Anyhow, i truly enjoyed this piece!x
This is quite a 'wicked' write...a definite freaky fantasy--to be certain!
However,I just couldn't help smiling--just a bit--at this one! I mean, i just kept picturing that Kool-Aid man breaking through your wall..:)
(....so, ummm...just what D I D you put in that Kool-Aid???? ;P )
(BTW, black goes quite nicely with red...as in licorice jellybeans, perhaps??)
Anyhow, i truly enjoyed this piece!x
21st Mar 2015 10:40am
Who's driving this bus anyway?...btw,when he smashed through,he had a side kick with him,a black licorice jellybean wearing a red hat and he was asking for you (peace) :)
21st Mar 2015 5:10pm
'Who's driving the bus?' Why,the Giant Stay-Puffed
Marshmallow Man--of course! :P
....And as for Kool-aid Man's side-kick, wellll....the next time you see him , say "Hey" from your's truly, and in the infamous words of Mae West, tell him "to come on up and see me, sometime!"
Sioch`ain leat !
Marshmallow Man--of course! :P
....And as for Kool-aid Man's side-kick, wellll....the next time you see him , say "Hey" from your's truly, and in the infamous words of Mae West, tell him "to come on up and see me, sometime!"
Sioch`ain leat !
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21st Mar 2015 1:39pm
What kind of crack is that in your head? Is it dripping fluid of crimson red? Perhaps after you bled, your brain thought it was dead till a glass of Kool Aide eased your dread...
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