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Axis
Riding the rapids,
this earth's spin,
on it's axis, my hearts tipping,
gone tripping, on the silent beat
bleeds for you on this bedrock,
below where my love resides.
If I close my eyes for long enough
my savior come
hold my arms out
you'll go break my fall
before my heart sacrifices
this earth's spin,
on it's axis, my hearts tipping,
gone tripping, on the silent beat
bleeds for you on this bedrock,
below where my love resides.
If I close my eyes for long enough
my savior come
hold my arms out
you'll go break my fall
before my heart sacrifices
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Re: Axis
14th Mar 2015 4:43pm
It requires enormous trust and some degree of faith to let loose and fall. I once saw Peter Gabriel perform before a capacity crowd in some arena. He stood at the edge of the stage and allowed himself to fall backward into the audience. They carried him hand-over-hand across the venue, then back to the stage. Yes, that might have been rock 'n' roll theatrics but it was also some kind of faith. That was inspiring. So is your poem in its quiet way.
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14th Mar 2015 5:17pm
Yes faith in the crowd that they didn't rip his clothes off hehe but that's just my thinking xD
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14th Mar 2015 7:14pm
I once saw a lead singer try the same thing but he fell on the floor. Shows you where faith gets you ;-)
*pats your head* good job Rose. Here's a cookie 🍪
*pats your head* good job Rose. Here's a cookie 🍪
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14th Mar 2015 7:31pm
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15th Mar 2015 6:34am
I do have leftovers :-)!
You just need to find away to get to the cookie, lol.
You just need to find away to get to the cookie, lol.
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15th Mar 2015 7:14am
Lol
reminds me if that film Edge of Tomorrow
oddly enough
or that film..Indiana Jones and the last cookie crusade
reminds me if that film Edge of Tomorrow
oddly enough
or that film..Indiana Jones and the last cookie crusade
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16th Mar 2015 8:27pm
I don't remember me ever seeing "Indiana Jones and the last cookie crusade" lol!
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16th Mar 2015 8:35pm