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The Rain Washes Our Love

Gentle but insistent
Rain and wet kisses
Sometimes you're like thunder
Lightning not far away

We used to fight more
Now we have met our match
In each other a fire of cause
Becoming one, a molten lava stream

Time and rain giving us pause
To make love and gaze Into eyes that see
Everyday is better than the last
Umbrella out collecting you

Written by PoetSpeak

Published 14th Mar 2015

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Re: The Rain Washes Our Love

Anonymous

14th Mar 2015 12:30pm

this is quite lovely, cowboy. i love how you tell her she's like thunder. great image! and when everyday is better than the last, well that is something to hold on to.

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PoetSpeak

14th Mar 2015 12:32pm

Soft rain does this to me, brings out the gentle ...

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Anonymous

14th Mar 2015 12:33pm

well, then gentle rain is good for you every now and then.

Re: The Rain Washes Our Love

PoetSpeak

14th Mar 2015 12:34pm

I have to agree

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Re: The Rain Washes Our Love

FindingZoe

14th Mar 2015 12:54pm

I like the contrast between rain and lava. That is how desire is, it burns and it soothes. This is a very nice poem, short, to the point, and nice to savor.