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When my thoughts fell in line
conjoined with
twinned
entwined with yours
It was then
even as far back
what I wanted
on my wish list
birthdays and chistmas
To be unwrapped
and taken
as a lover would do
by you
not for a fancy away day
but to be claimed
from the shelf of lost desires
Your on my wish list
it's the same as yours.
conjoined with
twinned
entwined with yours
It was then
even as far back
what I wanted
on my wish list
birthdays and chistmas
To be unwrapped
and taken
as a lover would do
by you
not for a fancy away day
but to be claimed
from the shelf of lost desires
Your on my wish list
it's the same as yours.
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10th Mar 2015 6:05am
We just got out of Christmas 😄 no need for a reminder. maybe change to Easter gift 😁
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10th Mar 2015 6:07am
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10th Mar 2015 2:19pm
This is beautiful Rose. Synchronicity of thought with a lover is magical.
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10th Mar 2015 3:28pm
I particularly like "the shelf of lost desires." Sounds a little like Tennessee Williams. He caught a streetcar named desire. Maybe you're a cat on a hot tin roof.
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12th Mar 2015 8:37pm
This is a gorgeous spinning helix of lovely wishes and intertwined word play.
great poem Rose.
great poem Rose.
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