deepundergroundpoetry.com
♪ ♫ Take a Breath ♪ ♫
The flowerbed is still but
waking as my fingers
openly taste the digging,
There’s moss covered
mud by where I sit and listen
again, to the sweet dark-eyed junco;
I bid farewell to winter’s tiny old pal,
as he walks near, hear ♪ as
the robin redbreast has risen.
waking as my fingers
openly taste the digging,
There’s moss covered
mud by where I sit and listen
again, to the sweet dark-eyed junco;
I bid farewell to winter’s tiny old pal,
as he walks near, hear ♪ as
the robin redbreast has risen.
Published 9th Mar 2015
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 4
reading list entries 0
comments 10
reads 736
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
9th Mar 2015 1:17am
take a breath and listen
to the song of spring,
and to the sound of old
winter's departing..:)
it's a lovely
song...
to the song of spring,
and to the sound of old
winter's departing..:)
it's a lovely
song...
9th Mar 2015 1:26am
Its amazing that when you spot one of them, it takes you by surprise, and then suddenly the air is filled with all the sounds and signs of spring.
I don't know how that happens, but it is lovely. :)
I don't know how that happens, but it is lovely. :)
9th Mar 2015 1:21am
9th Mar 2015 1:28am
Anonymous
9th Mar 2015 8:51am
Tahwheat pish.....itza klassique
9th Mar 2015 9:01pm
9th Mar 2015 7:09pm
wonderful stuff here, lady. really nice images, I really like the second verse, on the whole all of it reads really well, fair play
keep shining
keep shining
9th Mar 2015 9:00pm
Thank you so much. :) It has been a long winter. Spring is here and it is an awesome feeling. Now I have to spare myself some time away from writing to go out and enjoy more of it this evening. I have weed pulling duties. I love my garden and all the birdies that hang out with me there.
11th Mar 2015 10:33pm
12th Mar 2015 10:06pm
