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"Precious"
the need is bold
desire builds, grows
twofold
darkness, pleasure
extols His every
method
portrays intent
brightly, blushing cheeks
assent
she softly speaks
trust and control
given to enhance
unfold
climax, measure
her tightly bound black
leather
bonds supplement
embers, fire soon wreaks
consent
He grants, she weeps
tears, viewed as gold
most precious to feel
behold
wet as ever
His good little slut
treasured
cunt drips, content
she then whispers these
words meant
"You hold the keys"
*March 8, 2015*
Published 8th Mar 2015
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8th Mar 2015 9:24pm
Steaming HOT!
trust and control, vital aspects indeed.
she, a slave to His mercy as he holds the keys
Absolutely love it! Great write as always!
XO
Natalie
trust and control, vital aspects indeed.
she, a slave to His mercy as he holds the keys
Absolutely love it! Great write as always!
XO
Natalie
9th Mar 2015 3:16am
My sincere gratitude for your gracious remarks, Natalie.
It is very pleasing to know you think it, "Steaming HOT!"
Thank you for choosing this to be among your RL selections.
Feeling the love.
XO
Chad
It is very pleasing to know you think it, "Steaming HOT!"
Thank you for choosing this to be among your RL selections.
Feeling the love.
XO
Chad
8th Mar 2015 9:57pm
VP, if I may, these lines are well constructed.
I generally offer critique but this precise theme is beyond criticism.
You should be proud of such good work.
Respectfully,
LL
I generally offer critique but this precise theme is beyond criticism.
You should be proud of such good work.
Respectfully,
LL
9th Mar 2015 3:14am
Thank you, LL.
I appreciate your taking the time to read and share such favorable feedback.
I appreciate your taking the time to read and share such favorable feedback.
Anonymous
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8th Mar 2015 11:49pm
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9th Mar 2015 3:35am
Many thanks, S. Your encouraging words are always appreciated. I'm happy to know you loved it.
xo
xo
9th Mar 2015 1:48pm
Wow VP, seems like your key unlocks great treasure ; )
I enjoyed this flow!
I enjoyed this flow!
10th Mar 2015 3:27am
I treasure your visits, Lena. Thank you!
The unlocking is the magic. You know this. :)
Glad to know you enjoyed this flow. I did. :D
The unlocking is the magic. You know this. :)
Glad to know you enjoyed this flow. I did. :D
Anonymous
9th Mar 2015 1:58pm
oh my.
what a way to start my day!
what a way to start my day!
10th Mar 2015 3:30am
Top of the morn, Minerva. :)
Thank you for sharing such a positive reaction!
It's always a pleasure to start someone's day.
Thank you for sharing such a positive reaction!
It's always a pleasure to start someone's day.
13th Apr 2015 5:19am
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