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Re: The Apparition
3rd Mar 2015 8:02am
if it's merely an aparition, you give it very solid & fearful form. artistic, intense, devastating...
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3rd Mar 2015 3:24pm
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3rd Mar 2015 3:26pm
The fright is inborn, the wisdom is gained.
Thank you for sending me your wonderful message Mr. Kexby, I'm glad you liked this..:)
Thank you for sending me your wonderful message Mr. Kexby, I'm glad you liked this..:)
Re: The Apparition
3rd Mar 2015 5:40pm
This is right up my alley. Like the style portrayed here. If this is any indication of how your other poems are count me in as a continuous follower. Curious what motivated you to write about such a thing?
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re: Re: The Apparition
3rd Mar 2015 10:18pm
Perhaps because, truth is stranger than fiction.
Thank you Clearmindedvillian, i'm glad you liked it and i saw your entry as well in the comp, good luck to you.
Thank you Clearmindedvillian, i'm glad you liked it and i saw your entry as well in the comp, good luck to you.
Re: The Apparition
4th Mar 2015 1:47pm
OMG! You came back full force mamacita, damn
I watch pretending not to see
the shadowless, featureless
slithering
mouth open, barely
hissing from a practiced tongue.
I LOVE THIS ENTIRE DARK PIECE, but I just wanted to paste the above part in my comment..lol
I watch pretending not to see
the shadowless, featureless
slithering
mouth open, barely
hissing from a practiced tongue.
I LOVE THIS ENTIRE DARK PIECE, but I just wanted to paste the above part in my comment..lol
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re: Re: The Apparition
4th Mar 2015 10:30pm
There will always be the knowing, one cannot unknow..
Thank you Lena, i'm always grateful for the support you've given and the encouragement on my work, right from the very start.
Thank you Lena, i'm always grateful for the support you've given and the encouragement on my work, right from the very start.
Re: The Apparition
4th Mar 2015 4:05pm
Dark, and brilliant.. really a powerful write... thanks for sharing...
Dave
Dave
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re: Re: The Apparition
4th Mar 2015 10:36pm
Thank you Dave, I'm truly pleased and honored to have you read my work. I'm equally a huge fan of your writing, there aren't too many ppl nowadays who write from the heart and in my opinion you certainly fall in that shortlist of writers.
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5th Mar 2015 3:45am
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5th Mar 2015 5:58am
Re: The Apparition
16th Mar 2015 10:17pm
As Nietzsche said...when staring into the abyss...it will stare back...just the most amazing poem...a painting of words Rina *****
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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re: Re: The Apparition
23rd Mar 2015 11:01pm
Thank you very much Badmalthus, for your insightful comment.
Your work is equally impressive.
Your work is equally impressive.