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14 passings
years of madness
years of pain
14 years have gone forever
i'll never have them again
no time to moan and complain
no time to tear
up to my neck in sorrow
wishing for the end to come near
it's so hard to keep my own head
thats what i say
those 14 years
don't come by everyday
you don't get back 14 years
in just one day
its hard to keep your mind in place
and make all the bad things go away
just like my mother always told me
time cant be free....
oh i tried to see it your way....
i really did
years of pain
14 years have gone forever
i'll never have them again
no time to moan and complain
no time to tear
up to my neck in sorrow
wishing for the end to come near
it's so hard to keep my own head
thats what i say
those 14 years
don't come by everyday
you don't get back 14 years
in just one day
its hard to keep your mind in place
and make all the bad things go away
just like my mother always told me
time cant be free....
oh i tried to see it your way....
i really did
Published 11th May 2011
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Anonymous
11th May 2011 8:21pm
14 years will seem like a blink of an eye, or it will someday I promise! Good poem by the way! Its rather tame compared to your other stuff...keep it up goth gal!
11th May 2011 8:26pm
thank you it is tame compared to my other poems but why should i paint the same picture i will still write dark poetry but i'll write on a range of more topics!
Anonymous
- Edited 11th May 2011 9:35pm
11th May 2011 9:34pm
That is what I am trying to do as well...it can be hard sometimes...I just don't feel jovial or happy enough to write things like "fluff" I am not saying your writing is by any means...and I am not trying to insulting you at all. I just mean I can write about more tame subjects, but for some reason I just want to keep putting a dark twist on things "laughs" I can't help myself I guess. Kudos to you for trying to break out of the mold. Just don't sell you real talents short of course! Keep it up lady dark!
12th May 2011 5:09am
13th Nov 2012 1:53am
I love how you sum Ik what its like to have years of nothing but vendettas. I'm at my fourteen years, and scars and tears are all I remember. I love this piece!,
