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The Artist Curse (Co-written with Dave)
cemetery dreaming
beyond the frustration imagery of being free from my infatuation
monsters in the corner cheering me on
angels of life try to keep me calm
so I start thinking are all artist jaded?
does this make me not an artist?
maybe just a lost thinker…
in one hand I’m trying to hold love
in the other hand I'm courting strangers
enchanted vision
smothers out aggravation
inspiration building inside of me,
needing to burn free
demons have held me down to long
light has blurred the lines of reality
so do i approach my work differently?
does this mean I’ve changed?
another weary, and lost soul...
in my mind I’ve lived a thousand lives
beneath this so called madness remains
the hope I need
why has my passion become a chore?
can’t keep up with my own heart
with only being as good as my last poem
never enough so I keep pushing myself
how long till I fall, or just have nothing to prove?
might be best to just walk, start a new
a king at times and the jester in others
when giving in doesn’t mean giving up
maybe just moving on
why do I care so much?
wanting to share the knowledge
words manifesting within me
carrying on like the others before me
how long do I have?
to show the gift I’ve been blessed with
hell, all i know
is to ramble on...
with every ounce of my being
until death takes me..
beyond the frustration imagery of being free from my infatuation
monsters in the corner cheering me on
angels of life try to keep me calm
so I start thinking are all artist jaded?
does this make me not an artist?
maybe just a lost thinker…
in one hand I’m trying to hold love
in the other hand I'm courting strangers
enchanted vision
smothers out aggravation
inspiration building inside of me,
needing to burn free
demons have held me down to long
light has blurred the lines of reality
so do i approach my work differently?
does this mean I’ve changed?
another weary, and lost soul...
in my mind I’ve lived a thousand lives
beneath this so called madness remains
the hope I need
why has my passion become a chore?
can’t keep up with my own heart
with only being as good as my last poem
never enough so I keep pushing myself
how long till I fall, or just have nothing to prove?
might be best to just walk, start a new
a king at times and the jester in others
when giving in doesn’t mean giving up
maybe just moving on
why do I care so much?
wanting to share the knowledge
words manifesting within me
carrying on like the others before me
how long do I have?
to show the gift I’ve been blessed with
hell, all i know
is to ramble on...
with every ounce of my being
until death takes me..
Published 27th Feb 2015
| Edited 25th Mar 2019
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27th Feb 2015 9:53pm
Want to thank Dave for doing this with me :-)
Always a great write when we get together. Also is just great to work with such a good friend.
Always a great write when we get together. Also is just great to work with such a good friend.
27th Feb 2015 9:55pm
Couldn't agree more, DC.. glad i could be a part of it.. as usual i love the way it turned out...
Dave
Dave
27th Feb 2015 10:59pm
Very wonderful write, I just love it.
You and Dave write great together :)
You and Dave write great together :)
27th Feb 2015 11:03pm
He is the 2nt person i ever started writing with, lol. The first was with a friend who writes erotic books. Strangely enough we wrote a piece on bullying :-/
But yes me and Dave are always a great team. ^^
But yes me and Dave are always a great team. ^^
28th Feb 2015 1:43am
Thanks, Ms. Jackson.. for your kind words.. Nick, and i just have a connection..
Dave
Dave
27th Feb 2015 11:33pm
27th Feb 2015 11:37pm
I hope i will always write. But i have more than one love in life and writing takes away from my other stuff :-/ One day i'll need to focus on other things again but hope i could still write.
Thanks for the lovely comment :-)
Thanks for the lovely comment :-)
28th Feb 2015 2:06am
Excellent collab DC, working with Dave I know first hand how great it is, with efficiency and so much depth in any subject and this certainly falls in that category.
You both have touched some great points, on purpose, reasoning and finally the art and it's carnal definition of it.
Well done you two, great job!
You both have touched some great points, on purpose, reasoning and finally the art and it's carnal definition of it.
Well done you two, great job!
28th Feb 2015 5:03am
Always very much fun to work with Dave 😁
And yeah, sometimes its not always easy to do what you love.
And yeah, sometimes its not always easy to do what you love.
28th Feb 2015 3:16am
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28th Feb 2015 5:02am
28th Feb 2015 5:19am
Great collaboration
Really enjoyable reading
Congratulations to both for creating a good read xD
Really enjoyable reading
Congratulations to both for creating a good read xD
28th Feb 2015 7:06am
Anonymous
3rd Mar 2015 11:21pm
nice, very relatable
4th Mar 2015 00:06am
