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Full On
Gave him the keys
access all areas..
wasn't quite like that
but when I do meet him
well..
My kiss
full on
would reveal my nakedness
waiting for him later.
access all areas..
wasn't quite like that
but when I do meet him
well..
My kiss
full on
would reveal my nakedness
waiting for him later.
Published 26th Feb 2015
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26th Feb 2015 8:09am
26th Feb 2015 8:38am
Anonymous
26th Feb 2015 9:53pm
Rose,
Love a good lock and key story, and this one really clicks!
tornado
Love a good lock and key story, and this one really clicks!
tornado
27th Feb 2015 4:47am
27th Feb 2015 00:09am
I love the suggestive conveyance through the kiss in this piece. Elegant stuff Rose.
27th Feb 2015 4:48am
27th Feb 2015 00:17am
27th Feb 2015 4:49am
Anonymous
27th Feb 2015 1:03am
i love the double-ness of this.
access to body?
access to mind/soul/true self?
nakedness of body?
nakedness of mind/soul/true self?
SPLENDID!
access to body?
access to mind/soul/true self?
nakedness of body?
nakedness of mind/soul/true self?
SPLENDID!
27th Feb 2015 4:49am
