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Schizophrenic Mind
Incognito, this is my enemy
Swallow it whole to become a part
We're hands on a clock
Ticking along
Shame on you for forgetting the food
Perhaps we can all calm down
Put on your gloves in case it frogs
Maybe we can chase the snow by the pond
Showing minutes without hours
Killing time again
Chicken shit and horse crap pie
Disguising myself as the enemy
I do hope this feathered dog is only telling a story
I'd hate for it to be true
It seems you can't find a decent life in the city at all
Especially when you sit along all day
rambling to myself like this
Swallow it whole to become a part
We're hands on a clock
Ticking along
Shame on you for forgetting the food
Perhaps we can all calm down
Put on your gloves in case it frogs
Maybe we can chase the snow by the pond
Showing minutes without hours
Killing time again
Chicken shit and horse crap pie
Disguising myself as the enemy
I do hope this feathered dog is only telling a story
I'd hate for it to be true
It seems you can't find a decent life in the city at all
Especially when you sit along all day
rambling to myself like this
Published 26th Feb 2015
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26th Feb 2015 5:00pm
I really dig this write.. it's so abstract.. and the flow, is really good.. and i love how you usually rhyme, but for this piece you went away from it.. and i think your skill, loses nothing in the mix.. if anything i feel the freedom in the lines.. wonderful ink..
Dave
Dave
27th Feb 2015 2:23am
thanks. I took your advise, I'm glad you think it's not too bad. Ah. It's actually hard to not rhyme.
