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Before The Angels Come
Let me touch your face
one last time
let me smell your sweet scent
one last time
sit with me,hold my hand softly
one last time
not a spoken word
need to be heard
let me fall into your eyes
and look deep inside you
one last time
let our love fill each other
and cover our hearts
knowing the moment and the memories
will last for all time.
one last time
let me smell your sweet scent
one last time
sit with me,hold my hand softly
one last time
not a spoken word
need to be heard
let me fall into your eyes
and look deep inside you
one last time
let our love fill each other
and cover our hearts
knowing the moment and the memories
will last for all time.
Published 25th Feb 2015
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25th Feb 2015 5:35am
Really good vibe to this
and I must say great lines there.
Just flows lovely
well done Hash
and I must say great lines there.
Just flows lovely
well done Hash
25th Feb 2015 8:45pm
25th Feb 2015 12:11pm
Sometimes all it takes is a beautiful goodbye to cherish what was, in order to help move us to acceptance of what is. Loss and finality is painful but being able to have things to reflect upon and smile about afterwards is a gift.
Excellent write. Really enjoyed this.
Excellent write. Really enjoyed this.
25th Feb 2015 8:47pm
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25th Feb 2015 5:31pm
That's sad and so beautiful at the same time. It's good to have the opportunity to say good-bye to a beloved one and keep the memories forever in our hearts.
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19th Mar 2015 11:29pm
Hash.....I read this off line and to come comment......this is beautiful.....calmness I felt while I read has no words.....stunning write....enjoyed xo :)
20th Mar 2015 00:26am
21st Aug 2015 12:45pm
Nice work Hashman!! You've taken "parting is such sweet sorrow" and regrown it into a full piece just as worthy as the line.
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