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Moon
Long after the sunset, as the moon, seated in the nights sky
like a returning king, majestic, proud, aglow in cloudless
splendour with me and my reasoning to embrace my own
returning king, had me aglow too with ideas conjured up with
breathing rituals, about being seated under cloudless skies
with him.
like a returning king, majestic, proud, aglow in cloudless
splendour with me and my reasoning to embrace my own
returning king, had me aglow too with ideas conjured up with
breathing rituals, about being seated under cloudless skies
with him.
Published 23rd Feb 2015
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23rd Feb 2015 10:55am
23rd Feb 2015 4:30pm
23rd Feb 2015 6:51pm
23rd Feb 2015 6:58pm
Thankyou DC xD
i found the last two writes to be not up to my usual standard
but hey..u just gotta sometimes just skim the surface than just dive straight In :)
i found the last two writes to be not up to my usual standard
but hey..u just gotta sometimes just skim the surface than just dive straight In :)
24th Feb 2015 1:37am
I liked them :-)
It's great to bend and move your write. see what works for you. Your a good writer regardless.
It's great to bend and move your write. see what works for you. Your a good writer regardless.
24th Feb 2015 4:52am
23rd Feb 2015 7:04pm
The moon has its radiance, but then so do you. This is a brief and brilliant poem, Rose. Fine job!
23rd Feb 2015 7:13pm
23rd Feb 2015 10:31pm
24th Feb 2015 4:53am
