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Way On Down
When the devil came a calling,
same time as my thinking began to go meandering,
off on it's many travels, as it's tendency to do so when
I gets to be gravitating downwards, with the house
silently watching, my thoughts loud, about you and I.
I'd be in that dusty dirty cellar, if we had one that is..
You, me, and.. yes the devil, that's right the devil's
gotten hold, but it's you who's making the heat down there,
he's just a spectator, marveling at your heart warming ways
same time as my thinking began to go meandering,
off on it's many travels, as it's tendency to do so when
I gets to be gravitating downwards, with the house
silently watching, my thoughts loud, about you and I.
I'd be in that dusty dirty cellar, if we had one that is..
You, me, and.. yes the devil, that's right the devil's
gotten hold, but it's you who's making the heat down there,
he's just a spectator, marveling at your heart warming ways
Published 22nd Feb 2015
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Anonymous
22nd Feb 2015 5:29pm
the devil as a present spectator? now that is intriguing. nicely done!
22nd Feb 2015 5:50pm
22nd Feb 2015 7:44pm
Sounds like the devils a bit of a perv,lol.
Also sounds like you like that ;-)
Also sounds like you like that ;-)
22nd Feb 2015 8:13pm
If the devils watching it'll mean I'm being rather naughty
now who doesn't like a little naughtiness hehe
now who doesn't like a little naughtiness hehe
23rd Feb 2015 3:26am
You on the naughty list? My my Rose, just how bad have you been? And why do I get the feeling you will be making the devil blush?
Lol ; )
Lol ; )
23rd Feb 2015 5:36am
23rd Feb 2015 11:10am
In the basement - the best kind of central heating!
I imagine the devil is quite fuel efficient as well - or at least a renewable energy source.
In the end though Rose - this is straight out sexy!
I imagine the devil is quite fuel efficient as well - or at least a renewable energy source.
In the end though Rose - this is straight out sexy!
23rd Feb 2015 4:32pm
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