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Warte Nur
It's not that I
don't care enough
To cry
because you're gone.
I just know
This cannot be the end.
Wherever you go,
We will meet again;
This, to you I hereby swear.
For when you die,
I will be there...
Waiting.
don't care enough
To cry
because you're gone.
I just know
This cannot be the end.
Wherever you go,
We will meet again;
This, to you I hereby swear.
For when you die,
I will be there...
Waiting.
Published 22nd Feb 2015
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23rd Feb 2015 11:08pm
in this life, & in the hereafter. it's a very strong commitment. well done...
24th Feb 2015 1:14am
Thank you... Poorly worded or no, I feel like I got the idea and emotion across... I have been told that's all that matters, even when I am not satisfied with rhythm and structure and rhyme... Was that just their point of view, or is that a general consensus?
24th Feb 2015 2:34am
it's your creation, so you're the one that has to be satisfied w/every aspect of it, that's what matters. you'll learn many things abt tose aspects as you advance in your poetic endeavors...
Ha! I am never satisfied with my own works. I know I can do better... I will, someday...
Thank you. Thank you for all the advice and comments and everything.
Thank you. Thank you for all the advice and comments and everything.
13th Jan 2016 00:57am
THAT is a very sweet sweet spill of ink. Not the usual approach, but damned if I didn't wish someone
felt that kinda affection for me. nice work!
felt that kinda affection for me. nice work!
