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Our Love: Continued History (A Collaboration With TheGoddessMinerva)
i remember your tired hands
sliding brand new white satin
over thighs and above hips
it pooled between us
softly moved and tickled delicate skin
as hips swirled and tears
slipped from just married eyes
frenzied pulse and raw nerves
trying to hide behind a groom’s face
your sweet touch
releasing all tension
the warmth of your lips
fingers tracing curves
unlocking desire and tender emotion
happy that i was yours
going home
becoming home
packing up
moving out
lusting
loving
fighting
hardships all around
conceiving, twice
birthing, twice
making choices
craving even after all these years
submerged daily
in these loving souls
sharing built treasure
in this modest kingdom
no kings no queens
you’re still the heat that causes growth
maybe more than that first night
inevitable changes in body and mind
may cause slight detours on our
vastly scattered path
but with your hand and your heart
we will blaze a trail
worth remembering
such a pleasure writing this with my wife
sliding brand new white satin
over thighs and above hips
it pooled between us
softly moved and tickled delicate skin
as hips swirled and tears
slipped from just married eyes
frenzied pulse and raw nerves
trying to hide behind a groom’s face
your sweet touch
releasing all tension
the warmth of your lips
fingers tracing curves
unlocking desire and tender emotion
happy that i was yours
going home
becoming home
packing up
moving out
lusting
loving
fighting
hardships all around
conceiving, twice
birthing, twice
making choices
craving even after all these years
submerged daily
in these loving souls
sharing built treasure
in this modest kingdom
no kings no queens
you’re still the heat that causes growth
maybe more than that first night
inevitable changes in body and mind
may cause slight detours on our
vastly scattered path
but with your hand and your heart
we will blaze a trail
worth remembering
such a pleasure writing this with my wife
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Re: Our Love: Continued History (A Collaboration With TheGoddessMinerv
21st Feb 2015 10:56pm
I love each line and word said! it's hard to point out my favorite lines but i would say these
"frenzied pulse and raw nerves
trying to hide behind a groom’s face
your sweet touch
releasing all tension
the warmth of your lips
fingers tracing curves
unlocking desire and tender emotion
happy that i was yours"
HIts my heart raw
Good work the both of you :-)
"frenzied pulse and raw nerves
trying to hide behind a groom’s face
your sweet touch
releasing all tension
the warmth of your lips
fingers tracing curves
unlocking desire and tender emotion
happy that i was yours"
HIts my heart raw
Good work the both of you :-)
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re: Re: Our Love: Continued History (A Collaboration With TheGoddessMi
21st Feb 2015 11:04pm
Thanks, DC.. means a lot to me my brother.. the wife and i appreciate the read, and your kind words..
Dave
Dave
Re: Our Love: Continued History (A Collaboration With TheGoddessMinerv
re: Re: Our Love: Continued History (A Collaboration With TheGoddessMi
21st Feb 2015 11:30pm
Thanks, Zazzles.. i'm glad you liked this.. and my wife, and i appreciate the read, and your commentary.. and grateful for the add..
Dave
Dave
re: re: Re: Our Love: Continued History (A Collaboration With TheGodde
21st Feb 2015 11:43pm
Re: Our Love: Continued History (A Collaboration With TheGoddessMinerv
21st Feb 2015 11:49pm
Wow what a Love story!!! I had no clue you two are married! and what a beautiful marriage it is too!
Adore you guys and truly will remember this dedication for each other for a long time coming...
Loved to my heart ...
Zazzles xoxox
Adore you guys and truly will remember this dedication for each other for a long time coming...
Loved to my heart ...
Zazzles xoxox
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re: Re: Our Love: Continued History (A Collaboration With TheGoddessMi
21st Feb 2015 11:54pm
Zazzles, it's all true.. glad you'll remember it for a long time coming.. this write was from our hearts...
Dave
Dave
re: re: Re: Our Love: Continued History (A Collaboration With TheGodde
21st Feb 2015 11:59pm
WOW IT SURE IS!!!
You two are a bright beacon of hope!
wow just love this!!!!!
Jackie xoxox
BTW IM stalking the both of you :D
You two are a bright beacon of hope!
wow just love this!!!!!
Jackie xoxox
BTW IM stalking the both of you :D
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Re: Our Love: Continued History (A Collaboration With TheGoddessMinerv
22nd Feb 2015 00:16am
WOW WOW WOW! THEGODDESSMINERVA is the woman behind the man! I absolutely LOVE this!
You are that other POWER COUPLE at DU and i admire it greatly ; )
When a couple can support and share together, there is nothing you two can't overcome. I admire and respect it.
You are that other POWER COUPLE at DU and i admire it greatly ; )
When a couple can support and share together, there is nothing you two can't overcome. I admire and respect it.
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re: Re: Our Love: Continued History (A Collaboration With TheGoddessMi
22nd Feb 2015 00:27am
Thanks so much, Lena.. actually i'm the man behind, a great woman.. so glad you loved this.. don't know about power couple, we're just in love, and poets.. the wife, and i appreciate the read.. your kind words, and most of all the add.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
Re: Our Love: Continued History (A Collaboration With TheGoddessMinerv
22nd Feb 2015 3:45am
That's awesome your wife writes to. What a great understanding you both have for one another. Great write
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re: Re: Our Love: Continued History (A Collaboration With TheGoddessMi
22nd Feb 2015 4:09am
Thanks.. we have a great understanding, respect, and love for one another.. so glad you enjoyed.. we both appreciate the read, and commentary..
Dave
Dave
Re: Our Love: Continued History (A Collaboration With TheGoddessMinerv
26th Feb 2015 9:20pm
Beautiful collaboration, not just in poetry but in life. You both have done a wonderful job conveying your love and devotion to each other. I wish you both so much love and happiness!
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re: Re: Our Love: Continued History (A Collaboration With TheGoddessMi
26th Feb 2015 9:30pm
Thanks, Jasmine.. if our love is poetry, than our children are our greatest collaboration.. i'm so glad you liked this.. the wife, and i appreciate the read, and your kind words... and especially the add..
Dave
Dave
Re: Our Love: Continued History (A Collaboration With TheGoddessMinerv
21st Mar 2015 3:36am
God this was such a beautiful poem.
You have a beautiful relationship it shows the kind of love you two have.
Hope to experience something like this someday.
You have a beautiful relationship it shows the kind of love you two have.
Hope to experience something like this someday.
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re: Re: Our Love: Continued History (A Collaboration With TheGoddessMi
21st Mar 2015 3:48am
Thanks, Ms. Jackson.. i appreciate the praise, but i'm only so good.. my better half, is brilliant.. we appreciate the kind words..
Dave
Dave
Re. Our Love: Continued History (A Collaboration With TheGoddessMinerv
Anonymous
3rd Aug 2016 6:33am
Truly beautiful ...
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Re: Re. Our Love: Continued History (A Collaboration With TheGoddessMi
3rd Aug 2016 9:43pm
Thanks, Within.. i'm so glad you thought so.. i appreciate your kind words..
Dave
Dave