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Enchanted (By Your Ways)
delicate features
that define you
curvaceous
beyond compare
luscious lips
red and pouting
marvelous
against mine
clever thoughts
the words chosen
mesmerizing
my intellect
loving heart
filled with warmth
electrifying
all around you
seductive skin
so elegant
wonderful
when shared
eternal gifts
bestowed on me
enchanted
by your ways
that define you
curvaceous
beyond compare
luscious lips
red and pouting
marvelous
against mine
clever thoughts
the words chosen
mesmerizing
my intellect
loving heart
filled with warmth
electrifying
all around you
seductive skin
so elegant
wonderful
when shared
eternal gifts
bestowed on me
enchanted
by your ways
Published 21st Feb 2015
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21st Feb 2015 5:34am
21st Feb 2015 6:15am
Thanks, Virginia.. i have my moments.. glad you enjoyed.. as always i appreciate the read, and your commentary..
Dave
Dave
21st Feb 2015 5:37am
Ooh, beautiful! This spoke to my heart. Nothing quite like that feeling, I love how you cherish it. Immensely enjoyed!
21st Feb 2015 6:17am
Thanks so much.. truly glad you enjoyed.. i appreciate the read, the commentary, and most of all the add.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
21st Feb 2015 7:31am
21st Feb 2015 6:29pm
Thanks, DC.. i try, still not the greatest.. as always thanks for the read, and your commentary..
Dave
Dave
21st Feb 2015 9:34am
Diamonddave - You painted a picture. I read it. I saw it. I got enchanted and I'm glad its hynotic effect will remain with me as it no doubt will for the readers who come after me. You did good DD. Namyh
21st Feb 2015 6:27pm
Thanks, Namyh.. so glad you enjoyed it.. i appreciate the read, and your kind words..
Dave
Dave
Anonymous
21st Feb 2015 1:20pm
well, if i was a betting woman i'd say this was about yours truly. ;)
nice write, dave. very nice.
nice write, dave. very nice.
21st Feb 2015 6:30pm
That it is, Minerva.. you would be quite right.. glad you liked it.. i appreciate the read, and your commentary..
Dave
Dave
