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GHOSTS
Ghosts
Some people can see Ghosts
some people can't see Ghosts
if you ain't seen a Ghost
by now you can't see Ghosts
it is as simple as all that
I can't actually tell you what
Ghosts look like Ghosts don't
look like nothing is as close
as I can explain it to you
Ghosts are all around and found
about everywhere this is true
Ghosts are very much a part
of this world the same as you
Some people can see Ghosts
some people can't see Ghosts
if you ain't seen a Ghost
by now you can't see Ghosts
it is as simple as all that
I can't actually tell you what
Ghosts look like Ghosts don't
look like nothing is as close
as I can explain it to you
Ghosts are all around and found
about everywhere this is true
Ghosts are very much a part
of this world the same as you
Published 20th Feb 2015
| Edited 10th Mar 2015
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21st Feb 2015 1:00am
World?
Made me think more of a blind man than a ghost for some inexplicable reason
This does have the incomprehensible vibe of a late night ghost hunting reality show to me.
But still I appreciate the tricky usage of ghosts throughout, the constant turning back on itself and tongue tying flow, so long as it was purposeful I can say this was good
Made me think more of a blind man than a ghost for some inexplicable reason
This does have the incomprehensible vibe of a late night ghost hunting reality show to me.
But still I appreciate the tricky usage of ghosts throughout, the constant turning back on itself and tongue tying flow, so long as it was purposeful I can say this was good
28th Feb 2015 2:55am
