deepundergroundpoetry.com
Riding my Luck
I killed the beast
well..
sated his desire
rode my luck once
ok..twice
caught him on the rise
satisfaction spreading across
my skin with watching his fall
A twitch
or two..
an attempt to regain some pride
standing proud as once was
his ego deflating fast
Lingering
the scent of his victory dance
foolhardy be the beast
didn't count on me
for I and I alone tame the beast.
well..
sated his desire
rode my luck once
ok..twice
caught him on the rise
satisfaction spreading across
my skin with watching his fall
A twitch
or two..
an attempt to regain some pride
standing proud as once was
his ego deflating fast
Lingering
the scent of his victory dance
foolhardy be the beast
didn't count on me
for I and I alone tame the beast.
Published 19th Feb 2015
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 5
reading list entries 0
comments 12
reads 875
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
19th Feb 2015 11:57am
I don't think I would mind being tamed in such a fashion. i like the spirit you have portrayed in this piece Rose, the giving and then the final command/ownership.
Enjoyed Poem!
Enjoyed Poem!
19th Feb 2015 12:31pm
19th Feb 2015 12:13pm
19th Feb 2015 12:31pm
19th Feb 2015 12:35pm
19th Feb 2015 1:04pm
19th Feb 2015 4:59pm
I'm glad you didn't slay the beast. Just sated his desire. I'm sure he'll be back for more, and you'll be wishing him the best of luck. Ride on, lady!
19th Feb 2015 5:25pm
yes he'll be back
repetative he is but in the most delightful way..
sugaring the beast when he's sweet enough is never over doing it hehe
20th Feb 2015 00:20am
20th Feb 2015 4:46am
28th Jul 2016 5:22pm
28th Jul 2016 7:05pm
