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I was Promised Wonderland
Rabbits in coats, running around
Hanging throats, as we fall down
Painted doors, and large pit falls
Checkered floors, and shiny walls
A ticking hand, A growing man
I'm going mad, but that's the plan
Fires lick, as I grow too big
Cookies sick, this just isn't my gig
Eating things with tags, stupid
Next I'll be a body bag, I'm only human
This wasn't what I was promised, oh well
I'm not astonished, I ended up in hell
Published 18th Feb 2015
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25th Feb 2015 1:11am
I love your play on Wonderland.. original, and well written.. top notch work..
Dave
Dave
26th Feb 2015 5:58am
thanks very much, I find that wonderland poems are, when done well, one of my favorites. There's simply so much you can do with wonderland.
