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"Remembrance,"
Can You walk to the Window
Can You see what's out there
Does it Draw you out
Does it Compel you to Breathe
fresh aire
Do You feel that Escape is Best...
For you
Make it all new again
Be Reborn and know Excitement
one more tyme
Because, the, "Day is Far Spent,"
and, the, "Good Night," closes in
Be Reborn and know Excitement
one more tyme
Because, the, "Day is Far Spent,"
and, the, "Good Night," closes in
"Breath onto the Glass and see
your Breath cloud it up;
Write now into the Condensation
and make a Wish, that You'll
wake up
You'd sell your Soul to Live it all
over, again and again and over
again
Be Reborn and know Excitement
one more tyme
Because, the, "Day is Far Spent,"
and, the, "Good Night," closes in
You'd sell your soul to Live it all
over, again and again and again
Can You see what's out there
Does it Draw you out
Does it Compel you to Breathe
fresh aire
Do You feel that Escape is Best...
For you
Make it all new again
Be Reborn and know Excitement
one more tyme
Because, the, "Day is Far Spent,"
and, the, "Good Night," closes in
Be Reborn and know Excitement
one more tyme
Because, the, "Day is Far Spent,"
and, the, "Good Night," closes in
"Breath onto the Glass and see
your Breath cloud it up;
Write now into the Condensation
and make a Wish, that You'll
wake up
You'd sell your Soul to Live it all
over, again and again and over
again
Be Reborn and know Excitement
one more tyme
Because, the, "Day is Far Spent,"
and, the, "Good Night," closes in
You'd sell your soul to Live it all
over, again and again and again
Published 15th Feb 2015
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Anonymous
- Edited 25th Sep 2020 3:45am
15th Feb 2015 10:01pm
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Dearest Pan... I could relate to your writing and really like this poem, but i fail to see how it has mature content.
16th Feb 2015 5:38am
You're right gazelle.
Maybe I embellished
a little on that, or, thought
it did as I was Buzzed. Haha
Maybe I embellished
a little on that, or, thought
it did as I was Buzzed. Haha
Anonymous
16th Feb 2015 2:04pm
Beautiful write...i sit in front of that window this early morn, but the words i wrote seem so far away, or maybe its just the bitter cold that makes them seem impossible. Anyhow, great write my friend it hits home. With respect,
Hannah
Hannah
