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Seeking
And she rode away with him till the warmth
of excited shouts invaded her sacred sanctuary,
till silent he became with his peaceful release.
Moving up,
gracefully captivating him,
caressed his hair as she spoke,
spoke about the flow of love,
watching herself being taken
by a lovers eager display
till she too,
left seated in silent thanksgiving
naked and unashamed,
this was how it was to be,
natural,
openly
giving
pleasure
sharing the love
seeking experiences
discovering together.
Published 15th Feb 2015
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15th Feb 2015 10:07am
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15th Feb 2015 12:11pm
15th Feb 2015 12:09pm
Very romantic and loving. Made me smile, I appreciate beauty like this. Thank you.
15th Feb 2015 12:13pm
15th Feb 2015 1:02pm
15th Feb 2015 2:40pm
Ayi sí mami
That is how it's meant to be
natural
openly
giving
please
sharing the love
seeking experiences
discovering together ;)
Bravo!
That is how it's meant to be
natural
openly
giving
please
sharing the love
seeking experiences
discovering together ;)
Bravo!
15th Feb 2015 3:05pm
Yes self explanatory but it's worthy of putting it out there
again
the picture the descriptions could have been any in that sensual moment between two
it's the meaning behind the lust of the piece
Is more important
thankyou Lena
again
the picture the descriptions could have been any in that sensual moment between two
it's the meaning behind the lust of the piece
Is more important
thankyou Lena
15th Feb 2015 5:02pm
"Discovering together." Two words that apply to sex and most other aspects of a solid relationship. Really enjoyed this. Pretty hot picture too.
15th Feb 2015 6:01pm
thank you Mr Crow
I was in two minds regarding the picture but hey hehe
nobodies complaining xD
I was in two minds regarding the picture but hey hehe
nobodies complaining xD
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16th Feb 2015 1:06am
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16th Feb 2015 5:31am
16th Feb 2015 5:54am
16th Feb 2015 6:08am
Yes agreed
to be naked in front of another
well. .can't be more open or honest than that
it's the appreciation that just makes it all worthwhile
tnx John
to be naked in front of another
well. .can't be more open or honest than that
it's the appreciation that just makes it all worthwhile
tnx John
