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Burn-out
Your heart beat faster
Feelings on the passing lane
Premature burn-out
Feelings on the passing lane
Premature burn-out
Written by
Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
Published 14th Feb 2015
| Edited 16th Feb 2015
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Re: Burn-out
14th Feb 2015 10:50pm
re: Re: Burn-out
16th Feb 2015 7:02pm
Re: Burn-out
14th Feb 2015 11:15pm
re: Re: Burn-out
"...Inceptio est amentium, haud amantium...."
(Publius Terentius Afer)
Thanks, sodium589 :-).
(Publius Terentius Afer)
Thanks, sodium589 :-).
re: Re: Burn-out
16th Feb 2015 7:08pm
Re: Burn-out
15th Feb 2015 12:08pm
re: Re: Burn-out
16th Feb 2015 7:09pm
Re: Burn-out
16th Feb 2015 5:15pm
re: Re: Burn-out
16th Feb 2015 7:10pm
Re: Burn-out
Anonymous
16th Feb 2015 7:07pm
hopefully there wasn't a crash along with that premature burnout. and if there was...ah well. on to the next.
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re: Re: Burn-out
16th Feb 2015 7:14pm
We've been riding the dirt road, anyway, so we cut our losses, Minerva. Skinned knees, perhaps :-).
Re: Burn-out
22nd Feb 2015 10:02am
Sometimes you dont wanna control the rush and enjoy it...
Or a prolonged quickie hahaha
This made me reminisce my uncontrolled crushes.
Or a prolonged quickie hahaha
This made me reminisce my uncontrolled crushes.
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re: Re: Burn-out
1st Mar 2015 7:28pm
It's sad if someone you still have a crush on leaves you behind because he lives on the passing lane ...