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How does that make you feel
Want me to talk about it
Talk to my ass
Not gonna say a word
So shut your fat trap
Don't give a shit what you think
This time it's no trust
You don't care how I feel
Ya this pain is real
So shut the fuck up
I don't give damn what you say
How does that make YOU feel
Talk to my ass
Not gonna say a word
So shut your fat trap
Don't give a shit what you think
This time it's no trust
You don't care how I feel
Ya this pain is real
So shut the fuck up
I don't give damn what you say
How does that make YOU feel
Published 14th Feb 2015
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16th Feb 2015 1:38am
17th Feb 2015 00:26am
no i think you are very wrong about this
for ths reason for sure and others too
why in the fuck would you care about what others
think unless you have a strong reason
as far as your story goes its others that counts
then again we release burdens when we write
for ths reason for sure and others too
why in the fuck would you care about what others
think unless you have a strong reason
as far as your story goes its others that counts
then again we release burdens when we write
18th Feb 2015 5:08am
You've expressed a feeling many poets go through ... That moment when we don't care what others think or do let alone say. In those moments the cocoon feels just fine - so why don't people just leave it the hell alone.
Cool ink.
Cool ink.
19th Feb 2015 4:00pm
